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for Demon's Hold

by Kurotsuki

person Finnel
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=^-^= kyuu/naru!!!!!!!!! soooooooooo very hot!!!!!!!!!!!!
ohhh!!! whats going to happen?
up-date soon!! luck!
~goes to find some tissues to wipe bloody nose~
person kati
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter, you should maybe milk the situation a bit, y'know? Play up to the drama, not kinda rush throuh it, more description would be nice...UPDATE SOON!! ^^
person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I love this story!! *glomps* It's awesome. I love Kyu/Naru.
Kyu sounds gorgeous. And that lemon was hot.
I wonder what the others will do now that they know about Naru and Kyuubi.
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me happy. And sad all at once, but that's good! Please keep going! XD *begs*
person kati
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Super cool, my heart was beating so fast at the end of that chapter, the tension you build is amazing! Mysteries, mysteries, so many mysteries...But will you let me guess? Naruto is having sex with Kyuubi and in return Kyuubi is protecting the village? Is that it? You are such a cool writer!! ^^
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Inari Foxes supposidly bring good fortune, but somehow I doubt thats whats going on here. (Insert evil laughter!) I love this story. ^^
person Finnel
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another up-date!!! yay!!!
poor naruto! ~grrr throws sharp things at the rookie9~ how could they ignore him even for a little while!!!
but at least they know what they are doing is wrong!
will there be dark kyuu/naru play in the next chapter?
looking forward to the next chapter!
luck!
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like i like...please update ^_^
person Kyandoru
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting is what I think. It's so mysterious, I love that I can't predict what will happen! I wonder what Kyuubi and Naruto agreeded on that causes payment. Thanks for updating!
ja ne
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Now I want to cry!!! How depressing!!!


Of course, after the bite mark thing my first fear was "Oh no, God I hope this doesn't turn into some lame vampire fic.." then I remembered it was Naru/Kyuu. Phew. But yeah, acceptance then total disacknowledgement. How horrible!!

I eagerly await your next chapter. ^^ Great job!