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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is really good- please update! Vampire!Itachi sounds really hot. xd
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I think Sasuke's situation is soo tragic. I love it. Please continue. :)
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, they finally meet! The suspense was killing me during those last few paragraphs and the ending just hit me like a shovel. Why did he collapse? WHY? I need to know!!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing! This is so great! Itachi-sama and Sasuke-kun are vampires! *swoon*
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! You updated XD! THANK YOU! LOL, I've been waiting for this, and then I almost missed it, O.O!! You really do write beautifully, and this story seems to be shaping up quite well. I have no problems with the plot developing slowly, it just usually means that the story is more solid. The little flashback at the beginning was sweet and sad all at once, I love it Uchihacest when Ssuke's young and Itachi actually gives a shit. It also made for a great transition into the now, with the fight. And Holy cripes you shrunk Juugo!! Hehehehehehehe... The entire idea of a tiny Juugo tickles me, so cute, although I do love him ridiculously big as well XD. Zomg, I loved Sakura's reaction and the fact that Naruto blew her off. It's about time she realised, how beautiful that boy is and he realised his own self worth. I can't say I'm liking Itachi very much in this story, I kinda wanna kick his ass, so LOL, him collapsing in the bathroom just made me smile (O.O, oops a bit sadistic there XD). But it's a really great ending to chapter as well, because, of all the possible endings I had in mind, I really wasn't expecting that, LOL. I can't wait to see where this goes from here. LOL, so I'm gonna sit here and try to beam you inspiration so you update soon XD. Thanks again for the update sweetie, Ja!
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops. The comment before I hit enter on my keyboard by mistake. lol
Anywho,
EEK! Run Naruto run.
Is this all planned? You know, trick the prey into believing that you are down and then attack at the last moment?
Well, I can't wait until next chapter,
Ja ne
Anywho,
EEK! Run Naruto run.
Is this all planned? You know, trick the prey into believing that you are down and then attack at the last moment?
Well, I can't wait until next chapter,
Ja ne
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man it took me forever to read both chapters but it was SOOOO worth it. You are such an amazing writer. I was sucked in the moment I started reading and that very rarely ever happens to me. Your talent for writing is unrivaled in my mind, just too amazing to put into words.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
I love the pace you are taking in this story, the details you use to show us every scene as if it is right before our eyes. I think I swooned a bit while reading this. Take as long as needed to update, talent can't be rushed. Later!
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
I love the pace you are taking in this story, the details you use to show us every scene as if it is right before our eyes. I think I swooned a bit while reading this. Take as long as needed to update, talent can't be rushed. Later!
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How much I love your Itachi, the possessiveness and mean-ness. Wow...
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter
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