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for Through The Veil

by Rebuke

person Raeshi
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I never though of this pairing. I really like how the story is developed. Very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person llyoung
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kiba. Poor Shika. Hopefully Kiba will fight for and win Shika. Thanks for the update.
person cynaga
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
delicious~!
person cynaga
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I feel so sorry for Shika but it can't last with Kiba around... xD
person llyoung
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice sexy chapter (2). I really enjoyed it. I have read all of Sris stories and I enjoyed them as well. thanks for writing.
person cynaga
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even more interesting! Can't wait for more... :D
person llyoung
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the shadow stepping. I also look forward to the Iruka and Itachi story (Iruka is one of my favorite characters - Shika is my favorite.) And I like Shika with any guy except Choji so I'm really enjoying the story so far. Thanks for the update to the story.
person llyoung
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a drag, and it feels like one too..........Oh my. That is just absolutely hilarious. I laughed so hard I cried. Now I need to go back and finish the rest of the story. That line was just so funny and so Shikamaru that I had to stop reading and review immediately. Ok, now back to the story.
person llyoung
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I hope Shika finds happiness in the end (and if it is with Kiba that's cool - I do like shika/kiba as a couple). Interesting collaboration as well. I await the next chapter. Thanks for writing.