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for Falling Away From Me

by emp78

schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww Juugo will protect Naruto. Thats so sweet. Not that i blame him. Naruto offers friendship at the drop of a hat, and if i were Juugo i'd want his and try to protect him too. That Sui is funny/sneaky/bastardy all at once. Sasuke better watch out. Great update.
person Jelp
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. It's rare to see stories with Hebi in it. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
person Mija
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh wow I really like this, poor Naru finding out about his father that way, and thinking that Sasuke hates him so much that he would let Akatsuki kill him just to get his revenge, and ooooh Sasuke baby you should watch it looks like you may have to fight for your dobe if Sui has set his eyes on the cute blond, I totally loved this, its actually the first fic Ive read that incorporates the latest members of the Manga, Hebi...I really really enjoyed this and I hope to read more soon, thank you for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija....:-)
person darktoy
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always believed that when Naruto would meet Juugo something along those lines might happen. I do think that is kinda sweet. And probably the boy would be happy to be beside someone like the blond (and maybe some chemistry might happen XD)
about Suigetsu, he's kinda like Kiba, so perhaps the approach might be faster.
I Detect a jelous Sasuke in the near future!
UPDATE SOON!
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good read. There has only been one other Hebi Team story i've read so this is a treat. The only thing i had a little problem believing at first was Sasuke was his usual cold elf and then gave in easily so soon in the story to comforting Naruto. However, returning to his contemplative self afterwards evened it out. Is that a lil infatuation Sui is starting to develop there towards our Naruto?? I dont blame him. Naruto is handsome and open after all. It'd be kool for him to be a great ally and maybe even an addition to a love triangle...hmm??? Anyway its really good. Do update soon pls!!
person jc
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey love this fic i hope you continue writing this fic XD
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! Naruto's made some new friends huh? :)
person hisoka
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
narutos got alot going for him ne.sucks that hes being taken around like a prize shown off and bosted about.does sakura hate naruto and if so why?
updates?
person jewel
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't really liked any of the Hebi stuff so I was really surprised how much I enjoyed this one. But then I saw that it was yours. I've liked pretty much everything that you've done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Setsu
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I like and love this! ^.^ Its an awesome idea and I like where your going so far. Though Sasuke was a little quick to comfort Naruto when he told him who his father was. And he got more emotional then I would usually see...but I like ^.^ keep up the great work. Will Juugo open up more and chat with naruto, Juugo seems like a gentle guy, when he doesn't have killer intent, so I think he would get along really well with Naruto. And does Suigetsu only like Naruto's eyes? Will Kabuto show up at all to interfer? Who will Hebi meet next?. Will Tsunade send the others out to find Naruto? What about Sai? Will he want to save Naruto and will Sasuke get jealous? ^.~ Well Ja till next chap.