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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, priceless!! I love Naruto and Sasuke's attitudes in this one. The ending was especially good, though I have to wonder what happened to Sasuke's tie.... did they have to dry it with a hairdryer or something??? I don't think it's good for silk to get wet... ^_~
This was well written, and captured their personalities really well!! I whole-heartedly enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading the sequel... ^_^
This was well written, and captured their personalities really well!! I whole-heartedly enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading the sequel... ^_^
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' great!!! I hope more is soon to come!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOSH!! I am beyond the SMEX!! XD
YaY!! This was great!! There were parts when I was cooing and parts when I was laughing and parts where I was drooling.
...Do you wanna write the sex scene for my oneshot? :D
YaY!! This was great!! There were parts when I was cooing and parts when I was laughing and parts where I was drooling.
...Do you wanna write the sex scene for my oneshot? :D
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Adi-chan's tired. Hora, let me lull you to sleep *rocks adi* Another wonderful job's done. Even during your hectic schedule. The second chapter's awesome, the lemon's equally yummy if not yummier. And I'd never even know that cord'll come handy sometimes XD Now, I'll stare to my phone longer than necessary. Lolz.
“So? Old people have sex too you know…”
The Naru-quote of the month. Because that's so just Naruto ~LMAO
Otsukaresamadeshita :)
~ m a y ~
“So? Old people have sex too you know…”
The Naru-quote of the month. Because that's so just Naruto ~LMAO
Otsukaresamadeshita :)
~ m a y ~
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT~!
thanks... :D
thanks... :D
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seme-sama!!! >.> damn right I refused to write it for you and see? You wrote nose-bleed material (as if you don't know that) but the thigh loving >.< re-read it three times since I got home just so you know. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, those thighs were made to be wrapped around Naruto *nods* heh
Love that Naruto left Sasuke hanging for half an hour lol and the phone *drools* who knew phones could be so sexual (other than when being used for phone sex). I really liked that Naruto didn't let it go even though Sasuke did say he was sorry and Sasuke's saying that he'd missed Naruto made my heart melt, aww Sasuke - you're such an adorable pr*ck ^_^!!! It made me forgive him a little for having skipped the country (>.> not the smartest thing to do was it Sasuke?)
Naruto's conversation with Neji - didn't stop grinning once when reading that loool :D 'Naruto - I don't care' aww bless ^_^ lol and taunting Neji is cool, i liked that he put his hand on top of Naruto's and that it caught Sasuke's attention and pissed him off that little bit more, it was another thing that helped to show that more of Sasuke's feelings towards Naruto even if he was a coward and ran away at first ^_^... but then Sasuke's well known for doing stupid things...
I'll stop now before I get worked up.
MORE THIGH LOVING!!! More thigh biting too... in the next one *whistles* ^_^
Okay to sum the review up? Funny, hot, touching at times and IC which makes me want to publicly smex you cause IC'ness is the best!!!
hina xXxx
Love that Naruto left Sasuke hanging for half an hour lol and the phone *drools* who knew phones could be so sexual (other than when being used for phone sex). I really liked that Naruto didn't let it go even though Sasuke did say he was sorry and Sasuke's saying that he'd missed Naruto made my heart melt, aww Sasuke - you're such an adorable pr*ck ^_^!!! It made me forgive him a little for having skipped the country (>.> not the smartest thing to do was it Sasuke?)
Naruto's conversation with Neji - didn't stop grinning once when reading that loool :D 'Naruto - I don't care' aww bless ^_^ lol and taunting Neji is cool, i liked that he put his hand on top of Naruto's and that it caught Sasuke's attention and pissed him off that little bit more, it was another thing that helped to show that more of Sasuke's feelings towards Naruto even if he was a coward and ran away at first ^_^... but then Sasuke's well known for doing stupid things...
I'll stop now before I get worked up.
MORE THIGH LOVING!!! More thigh biting too... in the next one *whistles* ^_^
Okay to sum the review up? Funny, hot, touching at times and IC which makes me want to publicly smex you cause IC'ness is the best!!!
hina xXxx
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey kid! Nearly fell off my chair when I saw the update.
Don't know what else to tell you except keep them coming!
Don't know what else to tell you except keep them coming!
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. The part where Sasuke broke Naruto's truck because it was bigger and Naruto later saying he felt Sasuke would have broken his penis if he could have figured out how since it was also bigger was very funny.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, oh, the best part was where, after all his posturing, and threatening "seme" attitude, once Sasuke was untied, it turns out he bottomed yet again. LOLZ!!!♥