rate_review Reviews

I love your story. It was well written, except for the middle of the story. It was a bit confusing between the transition of point of views. I love a seme Naruto, especially a creative seme. The bathroom sex scene is great, love a tied Sasuke and being spank by a hot naruto, very kinky. I hope you'll expand this story or write a bathtub sex of of this story. Great job. :) Hope to see more of your work.

wow didnt think hed take it again thought hed wanna be top, whatever. I FEED YOU COOKIES

LOL. That ending! HAahahaha. Oh, that's the best! Naruto is the best seme evar! ;)

Okay, I am officially in love with NaruSasu because of this fic.
At first, I was kida like, "What the hell, I'll see if I like it..." and then I read it and I'm all "...SQUEEEEEE!!!!!"
Ahem. Excuse my exuberence, I have just found my new favorite pairing.
"Alcohol. Selective amnesia. Temporary insanity. All excellent reasons."
So great.
I think I've read another of yours...I'll have to check and review if I didn't before...
*dances off to read more NaruSasu*

I never thought I would be into bondage and spanking but damn that was HOT!!!

I've been reading your other one-shots and love them.

You've got some serious smut talent...teh heh.

Definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

How about a hot NejixKiba one-shot!?

Keep up the great work.

-Touya06

Out of all of your amazing fics.... I have to say this is my favourite! xD
Funny and sexy at the same time, much kudos to you!

Favourite part;
Sasuke’s eyes widened in shock. He started twisting and jerking making muffled sounds. Probably something like, “I’m going to fucking kill you, then bring you back to fucking life and fucking spank you and see how you fucking like it!” Naruto shrugged, all he really managed to make out was the word “fucking” so obviously Sasuke was enjoying this and now wanted to be fucked of course.


*cackles like a mad hen* xD
So friggin' good!

KK: Aha! I am unto you and your dastardly plan of death-by-nosebleed and I come prepared! Meet Bishi!Raoul! *Spanish guitars flare as Raoul rips off his shirt and makes his pecs dance* He has my blood type and will be giving me a live transfusiuon as I read! It's fool proof, mwahahahaha!
*KK reads, has massive nosebleeds, but emerges unscathed and totally conscious*
KK: Aha, see! I am alive and well. Thank you so much Bishi!Raoul! *Spanish guitars flare and die...* What...Raoul? Raoul?!!!!
Random!Bishi!Doctor: My god...this man has been drained of all his blood!
KK: Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!! Raoooooooouuuuuulllllll!!!!!
Random!Bishie!Doctor: There is...no hope! (Angst)
KK: Noooooooooooooooooooooo, damn you smexy lemoooooooons!!!! Damn you AAADDDIIIIII!!!
Random!Bishie!DOctor: *sigh* We lose more Bishi!blood donors that way.
KK: *Stops sniffling and starts leering at Random!Bishi!Doctor* Hey handsome...what's your bloodtype??*
Random!Bishi!Doctor: O.O;;; Nooooooooooooooooooo Raaooouuuuuuuuullll!!!

This was the first fic I ever read for you...so the review needed a little fanfare. Lol. I hope you don't mind that I am a raving lunatic. A raving lunatic that loves you and your smexy lemons!! I am just sorry about Raoul...he was smexy and will be missed.

OMG! I loved it! XD I love NaruSasu hehe...anywho, ahem...I LOVED IT!~~

awesome story add smut to conquest i love that story!!!!!!

Hahaha That was funny as Shit!! I love that Naruto learned the sexy voice and stuff from a book. And poor Sasuke still ended up being topped again! That was so much fun to read. Great job! ^.^