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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I look forward to reading more. I think it's the dark humor and the way you're doing what you can to keep the characters acting like they do in the original storyline. Contagious, like me.
Lol.
Lol.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work!
Please update chapter 6 ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 6 ^_^
Jan
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, please continue!
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, Kakashi is in for a temper tantrum wooo...
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAH...I so see Kakashi's panic mode triggered by disinfectant nurse...or nurse of any kind. Looking forward to more
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Slowly but surely...yep I know THAT strategy. ^_^ And I'll keep looking for updates because I just love Shika and if you add Kakashi I'm in heaven. Thank you!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and the nurse were so funny!
I know exactly how he feels, but I must say that when I was in the hospital Disenfectant Nurse didn't bother me nearly as much as Jamacan Accent Nurse.
Now I don't say this cause I don't like Jamacan accents, I do. I just hated her... and African Accent Nurse. I think it's because to my ears they always sounded happy, and when you've been in the hospital for months (5) you don't really want to hear happy. Especially in the middle of the night. They all worked night shift for some reason.
And I'm really mean when I wake up (at 4 AM) that might be it too.
Anyway I thought it was really cute.
I know exactly how he feels, but I must say that when I was in the hospital Disenfectant Nurse didn't bother me nearly as much as Jamacan Accent Nurse.
Now I don't say this cause I don't like Jamacan accents, I do. I just hated her... and African Accent Nurse. I think it's because to my ears they always sounded happy, and when you've been in the hospital for months (5) you don't really want to hear happy. Especially in the middle of the night. They all worked night shift for some reason.
And I'm really mean when I wake up (at 4 AM) that might be it too.
Anyway I thought it was really cute.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lemon Drops recommended this story. I'm glad she did. I like it.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please? *looks at Sihaya Atreides with puppy-dog-eyes* You'll get a Shika-shaped cookie if you continue ^_^
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, first, I've no idea what naruto is, but what I read of your story, it's well written. Kudos. Second, I love your pen name! I absolutely adore 'Dune' and have written a fair few dune fanfics, but have never submitted them. Keep up the writing, as you said, practice makes perfect!
marti (ripperslover@hotmail.com)
marti (ripperslover@hotmail.com)