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for The Chemicals Between Us

by SemeUke

person Yami no Ite
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, finally finished the story. Started reading it on Y-gallery, but it wasn't finished there, then found the link here on one of your pieces of artwork there so I could finish reading it. Was a good story, though I do agree that the ending was a little abrupt. Though I can understand the starting to get burt out bit. The writing style seemed to be getting a bit rough the last few chapters. Not a pairing I would usually read, but you guys did a good job with it. I liked it overall.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story. I read most of it on Y! but finished it here. I liked how you finished it, you left it open for reader interpretations. At least you finished it. It's more than a lot of writers do. good job and if you do do a sequal, i can see it being wholly hilarious.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT that was hot!!! I love how you guys do Kiba - awesome story!
person Dragonsbane
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you that was by far the best fanfic I have read and I have read a lot. Thank you so much for allowing us to enjoy.
person qwerty
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! That was the last chapter! sniff, I really liked this story. I wanted it to go on.
Great job!
person ren
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww! That was so good! I can't believe it's over! ;______;


I loooved it! Although I like Kaka/Iruka it was nice to see something different! ^____^
person RWM-K
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
You stopped posting on Y! so I had to find this here. But...wow...
THEY GOT FLIPPING MARRIED!
-nuzzles-
After you did absolutely horrible things to them you made it better. Yes. But...what ever happened to Itachi? Was he killed? Captured? Or is he off living in Iceland somewhere? O.o
person Twiggies
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes.
This was certainly a really good story!
I loved the pairing and all.
This was adorable and funny and.. well Everything at the same time.

SasuIru is one of my favorite pairing right now! :D
Thanks to you.

TsumeChouzaNejiSai foursome..?? That would be a sight to see! xDDD
NejiSai is just adorable.

The ending wa good! It was happy, cute, adorable and.. GOOD !
Great story!
person qwerty
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Almost over? waaah!
Don't wait, just update!




.................heh I rhymed!
person llyoung
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed Iruka driving the boat and being afraid he was going to run over the dolphins. Very sad to hear that the story is almost over - was hoping for many more chapters. Hope you also decide to post the next chapter soon. Thanks for writing.