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Very hot chapter. Personally, I like the idea of Kiba, Sasuke and Shika having sex.

Well i hope i am not the only one that needs a to wipe up all the drool. That was hot!

I really enjoy reading this story, i can see and feel what is happening.

I would like to know a little more about their surrounding like the boys rooms and the farm. I had no ideal that they where in peoples rooms i just knew it was a room. just little this like do they have books or posters or nothing a window something to make it more than a pace there are using for that moment.

Sorry if this is rude i am not trying to tell you how to write just what i think could make a really great story even better.

-Hallow's Eve

thank for your time.

Thank you for updating, I was getting worried about you guys. The emotional distress is starting to get to me, but I can't stop reading, another sign of the quality of your writing.

You get extra roly-poly for your rules!!!! Yeay for you!!!!!

Ehehehe

I love all the alternate pairings! =D

I wonder what will happen to S+I now! Oh noes!

Hope you update soon!

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That was intense!! I am dieing here!!!!!!!
Must read more! ;___;



Update soon!

ahhhh!!!!!! I hope iru and sasuke can patch things up!!!


I wonder if there will be any further interactions with our dear naruto!

Ehehe, I can't wait for the next chapter.

gah! this chapter made me so sad!
i hate it when they aren't together. T_T

this is definately one of the best things i've read in a very long time, and i can't wait till the next chapter. <3
[hell. i'd never even considered this pairing before i ran across this. and now i can't get enough. lol.]

I've just read the last two chapters in one sitting. I cried. Lots. I cried so much I had to stop reading while my eyes cleared up. That was so... scary? Sad? Horrific? It made me hate Kisame and Itachi with a passion now! And oh... At least, I'm glad it's all over and they're both out of it alive, but what about their relationship now? Gods, I felt so sorry for them throught all of that, especially Iruka, going through it all again. Damnit, it got me so emotional. I need to know what happens next now!

*frowns* To be honest I really don't like the last two chapters... But Dom you know - I don't like that kind of thing... But still, the story is good. But I'm sad the kitten had to go... You could make him a ghost cat that comes back and haunts Itachi and Kisame... scare the shit out of them. Make them suffer!

I hope sasuke and iruka go back to their old selfs!!!I would hate for them to be broken!