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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, Very well written, I love the way the plot is going. I'd love to see more of it, Please update very soon (:
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update and when you do can you send me a link at idrawanime@gmail.com
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, one o the best hp-naru xovers(ie the second, the 1st being your other one) but either way email me when you update this one too im deannathx@comcast.net
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh you just gotta update!! you get my hopes up and then i find only one chapter. mou no fair!!!! UPDATE ONEGAI!!!!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know that was funny, Sasuke had to run for his life, poor boy... Oh well.. That's what he get's for being too lazy to cut his hair. I wonder... how many people had a heart attack when they found out it was Naruto under the mask... That sounded wrong... XD Anyway I'm looking forward to a new chapter, this is good so far and I didn't see anything wrong with it. To me the way you have the chapter writen it flows and is easy to read. There's not any useless information... so to me this is good, I wish I could write like that... XD
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, liking how this is going so far. The personalities are definately visible for the few you've delved into and I really want to see how you'll make this grow.
btw, offering to be beta, right here! just email me back if you'd like me to. I beta for a few others as well and one more won't hurt a thing. ^^
btw, offering to be beta, right here! just email me back if you'd like me to. I beta for a few others as well and one more won't hurt a thing. ^^
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start... I'm curious to see what you have planned next
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a good start, this looks like it might be quite good (a decent HPNaruto is really hard to find... Yarochisai on FF.net has a really good one called Stranded! might be worth a look?)
the only thing that annoyed me was the lack of spacing... it made it a bit difficult to read
other then that it was quite good, looking forward to the next chapter
luck!
the only thing that annoyed me was the lack of spacing... it made it a bit difficult to read
other then that it was quite good, looking forward to the next chapter
luck!
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start - I want more!
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very cool. can't wait for next chapter! =)