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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice job , but dose naruto ever find out it was sasuke. if not you should write a sequal.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was Sauke wan't it??? I really loved it although I think it was a bit too short!!!! But I so would like to know how it will continue!!!
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY REALLY STRONGLY FEEL THAT YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS A MULTI-CHAPTER!!!! This idea is so god damn SCORCHING sexy that it beyond a doubt deserves to become a real story!!!! Seriously if you don't do it, I might secretly start writing a chapter 2 myself hehe!!!!! Nah that would be terrible of me, but hell if I'm not going to dream about what might happen next!!! PLEASE think about it!!! It would be EPIC!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo Lovvvve your writing!!
-Ash
-Ash
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn i can really see this one going on for at least one more chapter were Naruto finds out who held him lol to i do have a pretty good idea i would love to see how he reacts to that information
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
On the way over to Dreams I stopped to reread this one to.(love it) It's going to be a Z-day! Reading Zrina stories all day ^_^
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your writing style.
Great work.
- Jordan.
Great work.
- Jordan.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work! It was cool how Naruto reacted from his need for touch, and it was so well written ^_^ I definitely think there should be a 2nd chapter where Naruto figures out it was Sasuke and his reaction. Please???
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot. I was hoping that maybe I can convince you to not leave this as a one-shot. This was too much of a cliffhanger. I want to see how Naruto reacts to the identity of his tester. With the bitemark and all---evidence. Ahh, so much potential for multi-chap. But it was great.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think my exact words were "OMG I *heart*!!"
I absolutely LOVED this fic. Short usually isn't my thing at all but this was soooo good I'm so happy that I decided to have a peek at your other fics. I literally fell over when I realised it was Sasuke (although the fact that the 'captor' prepped him gave me the initial impression that something fishy was going on). Any plans on writing a sequel? Though it would definately have to be a stand alone one 'cause this one is just too sweet to mess up by adding another chapter (though theres that part of me that also reaaaaallly wants to know what you had in mind for when Naruto wakes up and it dawns on him that it was SASUKE!!)
Okay, think I've blathered on long enough, just wanted to tell you that this was awesome.
Kaarsis
I absolutely LOVED this fic. Short usually isn't my thing at all but this was soooo good I'm so happy that I decided to have a peek at your other fics. I literally fell over when I realised it was Sasuke (although the fact that the 'captor' prepped him gave me the initial impression that something fishy was going on). Any plans on writing a sequel? Though it would definately have to be a stand alone one 'cause this one is just too sweet to mess up by adding another chapter (though theres that part of me that also reaaaaallly wants to know what you had in mind for when Naruto wakes up and it dawns on him that it was SASUKE!!)
Okay, think I've blathered on long enough, just wanted to tell you that this was awesome.
Kaarsis
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!
I think I need a cold shower!!!
The only bad this about this fic is that I want moreeeeeeee! jeje
-I know I know this is a OneShot but a girl can dream...-
I think I need a cold shower!!!
The only bad this about this fic is that I want moreeeeeeee! jeje
-I know I know this is a OneShot but a girl can dream...-