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for Anbu Training

by Zrina

person chineseartist
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definitely not what i expected. just goes to show that surprises are good things.
person Kaishiou
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this...if there is a favourite list i can put on here, i will put it on...it really is a great fic. thank you.
person Rosebud
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WoW!
I loved it! ^^
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great. Please write a second part, I totally want them to get together. Poor Sasuke's smitten. So hot.
person Sama
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg...I think I just died and gone to heaven, seriously!! I LOVED IT!! Girly, how do you do it? Seriously! Your just fablous..amazing really.I LOVE IT!!! GAH!!! Please! Please consider maybe a sequeal? I'm not asking for a continuation! LOL, nope not at all! I just think naruto should find out sasuke rape him, lol, and bang the hell out of sasuke. And I don't mean in the form of fighting, if you get what I mean. XD. Other then that! It was wonderful! Awesome smut as always!!! Ttul! LOVE YA! bye byes!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeal*

that was adorable, i was hoping i knew who it was from the begining, because who wants naru-chan's virginity to go to some punk water ninja. the last couple lines made me smile and giggle, and i haven't quite stopped yet. good job on the PWP, and it doesn't seem like it's going anywhere else, so other chapters aren't necessary. i think you met your objective all the way

^;^
person Kimra
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you! I keep saying it and I mean it, purely plutonicly of course. :D This story is awesome, fucken brilliant, brilliant and god damn. I assume it was Sasuke, even though it's never stated as such, but I'll assume it was anyway... mostly because I want it to be him, the clues point to him, and I know you write Naruto + Sasuke pairs. :D If you have no intention of continuing this story, in all your awesome skill, may I attempt to write a second part for it? I know that's rather presumptious of me to ask and I couldn't do it the justice you clearly could, but if you wont continue it I would love permission to try. :)

Okay enough with my ramble. Can't wait to read whatever you post next, though of course I'm always extra happy with Sound of Dreams. :D
person Adi
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(too lazy to log in)

YAY you posted it!! will review properly when I come home tonight *falls asleep* lol The smut gave me happy dreams *late for work* crap!

*hugs*
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh :D ANBU training sounds good to me looool and can I just say - you write incredible smut! You really do, you had me drooling on the keyboard as usual loool. Great oneshot!!! I'm wondering if it's going to stay a one shot... but heh, if it stays like this it's good too ^_^

Hina xXxx
person cynaga
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This totally rocks. I had just the smallest suspicion it was Leaf Anbu and Sasuke testing Naruto but not sure. That made it really fun. Even in the end Sasuke's name wasn't explicitly called out by the Hokage. And so smexy!