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for Anbu Training

by Zrina

person huntress
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this one! "The Sound Of Dreams" was good, very good. But I have a feeling this will surpass that! Nice, very nice.

Ureko =3
person Allys
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Lady that was HOTT!! I loved the position with the spreader bar and Naruto's ass in the air XD. I loved how hot they got and that the sex was pretty realistic. Real men shouldn't cry and ball about being penetrated :D, especially if they were prepared well. As usual you rock my socks off, a little surprising that Naruto was on bottom, since it's you, but then Naruto would be exceeding hott no matter where he was XD. LOL, congratulations on your first bondage fic XD. I hope you entered it into the club XD. I'll adore you even more if you do, I haven't checked there yet will go over in a minute. :Showers you in LOVE and ADORATION: I only wish I could have seen Naruto's face when he found out who it was XD.
person akume
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was HOT. I'm just sad it had to be a one-shot. ~sighs~ Thanks again.
person onobaby
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God...you are such a great writer. *sigh*
person Olli
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!!!
person Gio
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could you add a second chapter where Naruto realizes who his rapist is?
person llyoung
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another very well written story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing.
person Damp
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I KNEW IT WAS PART OF THE TEST!! I just KNEW it, I wasn't expecting for Naruto to react like that though. I thought for sure that he would've resisted a lot longer than he did, though. Oh well, I can't wait for your update in 'The Sound of Dreams'.

-Damp *I was really hoping for the sex to be longer though....*
person ladywolfTerri
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mkay.. first.. amazingly good story!!.. seriously!!.. good story and smexy as hell!!.. only thing.. could it be a 2 shot??.. I can see why you wouldn't want another full story.. even if it has a wonderful basis.. though it would be a wonderful short ficlet.. maybe a few chapters.. it's just really leaves you wondering what will happen when Naruto notices Sasuke's hand... cause you know he's bound to... and how Naruto handles things when he wakes up....