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for Long Way Home

by ursweetheartless

person kocoum
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uuuhhh orgasm. :) it was awesome. i love the whole idea of them kinda role playing and actually feeling and getting into different characters. yay for rape that really isnt rape but just hawt consensual man smex in disguise >:D
person loopdiz
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~*~*drools* LOVE IT!!! I love the lemon! i LOVE the dirty talking!^-^AWESOME!!so smexxy!!~*~*Keep up the WONDERFUL work!!~*~*
person emp78
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Actually not an uncommon occurance in a relationship. LOL. Want to know what Sasuke's 'game' will be. Please write another chapter?
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow luved it hehe i kinda figured it was just a game between the two, seemed a bit like a role-playing story hehe , hope you write more like this , great job
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooh that was hot... hehe
person Allys
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that was smexcellent. I loved the dirty talk and the setting. Man-pussy XD LMAO!!! Hott, but funny as all shit at the same time XD. I liked their game actually, and the little bit at the beginning when Naruto said he picked the alley tickled my mind so I never got too distressed, I was going to wait it out XD. That was fun.