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O.o;; That seemed a little... odd. It made me wonder if someone else got into your account and posted those last two chapters...

I enjoyed the ending very much because Naruto was so greedy so he deserved it. Naruto wanted the great job, his boy toys, and his perfect woman. But Melissa could have been just a cover for his kinks tho. I disliked Melissa because she knew about it and she played with it to suit her needs. Naruto wouldn't have moved otherwise. I'm glad Sasuke cried no tears for him because two years of suffering and being played is enough.
I can imagine Naruto killing Melissa to keep her quiet/get revenge for making him move and losing his boyfriend but what I didn’t like was Naruto killing the baby unless it wasn’t born yet. Throughout the story you can tell Naruto loves kids so I can’t picture him doing that no matter how crazy he ended up being after the break-up.
I also wished Sasuke grilled him for more info on what else Naruto did. It just IC for him thoroughly get all the dirt he can. Plus I’m curious why Naruto only did 2 years in jail and with all the moving he did, it seems like he had many boy toys.
My favorite chapter is Forbidden because I finally found out what motivated everything Naruto did and Sasuke gave him a piece of his mind. Sweet. I loved this entire story. I can’t wait for whatever you have next. :D

wow... that def. took a turn i was not expecting! is the story over? or will there be more? I applaud your ability to create a twist in the story that is fresh and new and completely unexpected!!

LOve it!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon.................:)

Grate chapter!!!! Naruto is a bastard!!!!!! POOR SASUKE...... I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

That was hot! Sasuke's worries at the end were so sad. I thought Naruto used a condom; did it break? This is so different, with Naruto being the teacher. Good story!

Wow...Sasuke normally a senior when this kinda fic happens nice change! I look forward to reading more. I really like it ^^ oh and u have such a cute name too ^^

Hey, what a cool story. I like it, and I love Naruto being the teacher and Sasuke the student.

Anyway, great story and hope to read more soon. Ja

Hello, how are doing?

I've just read the first two chapters of your story and I'm already hooked. I love the setting. It's unusual to have Kakashi and Iruka being Sasuke's dad's, there usually Naruto's. Oh and Naruto being the hot teacher and Sasuke the student. HE HE.

So, loving it so far, and I will be waiting for the next update.

Cool story.

Very cool story.

I like it and I enjoyed reading the two chapters, hope to read more soon.

TTFN