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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story I just wish that you will actually update like you say you would but I doubt that I bet this story will be left unfinished whats new with authors these days
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This seems like a good start, and I hope you continue this fic, as there aren't many Tsunade stories out there.
The dialog flowed nicely. The only thing that bothered me was this:
'“He’s a fighter.” She noted, and Naruto grinned despite himself.
“Damn straight!”'
The dialog flowed nicely. The only thing that bothered me was this:
'“He’s a fighter.” She noted, and Naruto grinned despite himself.
“Damn straight!”'
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best Tsunade x Naruto Lemons I have read. (and I've read all of the ones I could fine)
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it!! update please!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is certainly going to be interesting i wouldn't mind seeing one with Tsunade/Naruto/Hinata for this but hey thats just what i would like to see.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit...that was HAWTTTTTTTT
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was different-but kinda hot. Keep writing. Would like to see where this is going
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, that while I'm normally NOT a fan of the Tsunade/Naruto pairing..this was very delicious and insidiously hot, my dear!
Screw the 'mistakes', yours is one of the best fics I've seen in the Naruto section. Keep up the good work!
Screw the 'mistakes', yours is one of the best fics I've seen in the Naruto section. Keep up the good work!
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff really! Good plot so to say, a fair few puns (Puns and pr0n are after all great win) and the act itself was very well written while at the same time avoiding some of the less sober words sometimes employed by similar stories. Cunt isn't a sexy word, darn it!
*Thumbs up*
*Thumbs up*
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hotness! I thought I was the only one loving the Tsunade/Naruto hookups. Eager to read more.