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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my challanges always seem to have the greatest respones don't they? can't wait for the actual knocking of boots
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great intro and very well written like they should be :-)
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love it I cann`t wait to read chapter to I was wondering are you going to have anybody else that she does this to if so please do not have that loser Sasuke in it I only say that is because I hate Sasuke he can die a hundred times for all I care hell it would be even better if it is only Naruto she does this with and have Shizune join in as well anyways please update soon please
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's decent.
I also like Naruto/(Older woman).
I also like Naruto/(Older woman).
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great. especially the whole
"mister stiffy" thing. that made me crack up.
cant wait for your next update.
"mister stiffy" thing. that made me crack up.
cant wait for your next update.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE is all I have to say... keep at it.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude this story was sweet i also read about your not proffesional or anything but by far this was along one of he most erotic naru/tsu pairings ive read most ive read tsunade to ooc but i fnd that tsunade in ur story is exact to the character (just with a fetish for little blond haired, blue eyed, ramen topping named, main characters, with a show named after them) i also love the idea of the medical check up being the base of it , seen it done before and trust me yours is the best from wat ive seen. if u kmow of any other really good naru/tsu ( favorite pairing no matter the genjutsu) tell me and awesome story.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah forgot to mention pre-time skip naruto and tsunade was an awsome just the idea of naruto (only fav male character) getting some so young is sweet.
Keep on writin dude an peace!!!
Keep on writin dude an peace!!!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW, great work, i hope you update soon, because i cant
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad, but why choose pre-timeskip Naruto? Why have him be so young?