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for Tsunade Collection

by Fyberness

person mtp
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, please continue.
person SHAWN
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story.
person Ri100014
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! That was awesome! I rarely say such fanatical words, so take them for all they're worth because that was just so very well done. The only thing that seemed out of place was Tsunade's lack of reluctance in doing all this, but since you'd have to write a whole nother chapter to accommodate that, its not necessary. But everything else, from Naruto's blind childish ignorance, to Tsunade's approach and handling appeared so very like what they'd do. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please done keep us waiting too long!

Till next time... adios.