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for Full Circle

by vanessaclarke

person sandra
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is original. I can't wait til' Sasuke finally realizes the mistake he's made, hope you update soon.

~Sandra
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Question, will this be SasuNaru or NaruSasu o.o? Since you did mention something about taking Naruto's last name ^_^;;
person Chria
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five is weak because everyone is meeting and putting on their best face. Not much personality is shown. Sai came off as the perfect charmer and I loved that. I wish Naruto would be a bit more pissed off that Sai is hitting on him in front of his husband to be. Because it's not proper and it embarrasses him in front of his parents and future in-laws. I also think Naruto would blame Sasuke for it because he doesn't keep his friend in check. Really, I'm dying for them to start fighting next chapter. I feel it in my bones it's gonna be good. :D
person SharinganEyes
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOO Naruto makes wonderful music! I like that....tho I don't like Sai....mean man seducing naruto for cash! for shame!!! anyway when is Itachi's son coming back, he was such a sweetheart a loved him! Oh and i hope Neji does kick Sai and Sasuke's butt! With Lee...because Lee was like poptarts....CRAZY GOOD!
person lo
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fun, poor Naruto, being forced into that situation. I can't wait to see more.
person qwerty
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist with the whole Sai thing. Well Sasuke should feel guilty ::huffs:: honestly. heh
Naruto is really oblivious to flirting (cough cough Neji) Can't wait for Neji to come!
Update!
person Cloudhawk
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story XP <33333333333333333333... what else can i say? @.@
person Memphis Atari
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more! love how the plot is going :D Sakura was hilarious.. i hate spoiled rich princesses.
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this is cute and hilarious. Oh Lord his is what happens when you try to trick parents...
person A Ravens Song
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's going to be so much fun reading this story!