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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really nice. Well done I really liked that wrap up at the end.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! The kids are so sweet! Great job!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do an epilogue
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Sai and Sasuke was so funny. Please I would love to read an epilogue if you decide to write one. Great Story keep up the good work
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story was a nice read, humorous and nicely developed. I kind of think you might've rushed through the end but it turned out alright anyway. It was sweet, if a little farfetched, and it keep me up reading all night long. lol I must admit it's quite a relief to read a good story and your's is one of the better ones. Anyway kudos for pulling off the sweet but not cloying kind.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Organized?? Me and organized don't even fit in the same category! Lmao...I kinda just wrote it...I was feelin it, so i wrote it....normally i keep that sorta stuff to myself....but i thought: Hey! I'd like it if some random person told me i was their favorite author! So why not you?!
That was actually the longest review i've ever written. So feel special.
So Itachi was behind all this huuh...(i think i hear a sequel calling.....do you?....no?...am i hoping for too much??....yeah?....well a girl can dream!)
I was a bit surprised....i didn't know that was the last chapter until i read your little author's note @ the bottom. Y'know you left so many doors opened, that you could totally make a sequel....I mean think about it.
You've still got:
Sai & Sakura.....you could make some little thing happen between them
Neji & Itachi....& fucking Takara (This little character was my FAVORITEE!!!((Well i liked Itachi too)) He was so freaking adorable....& i hate kids too!) Y'know....we can see little glimpses on their relationship....maybe some jealousy/tension between Neji & the mom... maybe she's a homophobe & she's hatin on Neji &...i dunno wants to take Takara from Itachi to make him choose between the two....custody of Takara or Neji...
Sasuke & Naruto....with his music....& I know you can write normal situational scenarios....but i'd love to see your citrus skills in this fic ; )
About the epilogue...you already know my answer on that one....but I'm thinkin....sequelogue....more More MORE MORE!!! I loved this fic the best because it was steady...not...(well i think) like one update...then 20 years later Oh! i forgot about this little sucker *update 20 years later* Y'know? So i didn't feel like i hadda go back & read the last chapter to remind me of what happened. It had enough flirtation to keep me coming back....normally it's sex....but this was okay...because your characters were right on! If Sasuke had been a skribbler & was like Naruto...i would have been like 'NEXT!' Buuuut they weren't so-.....Gahh! I'm ranting...
Anywhozle this one won't be as long as the last....but it's something! Thanks for your equally long review though...you helped me see some things I've lost sight of....i knew i was loosing focus, but i was just trying to figure out where i could bring some old stuff back up....eh...I'll figure it out....Sooo if you read the review i just posted like 20 minutes ago...i accidentally posted the same review twice...so i deleted one...& it ended up deleting them both....so i hadda re-write it...but if you don't know what the hell i'm talking about, enjoy your review!
Thanks again!♥
Love ya!
That was actually the longest review i've ever written. So feel special.
So Itachi was behind all this huuh...(i think i hear a sequel calling.....do you?....no?...am i hoping for too much??....yeah?....well a girl can dream!)
I was a bit surprised....i didn't know that was the last chapter until i read your little author's note @ the bottom. Y'know you left so many doors opened, that you could totally make a sequel....I mean think about it.
You've still got:
Sai & Sakura.....you could make some little thing happen between them
Neji & Itachi....& fucking Takara (This little character was my FAVORITEE!!!((Well i liked Itachi too)) He was so freaking adorable....& i hate kids too!) Y'know....we can see little glimpses on their relationship....maybe some jealousy/tension between Neji & the mom... maybe she's a homophobe & she's hatin on Neji &...i dunno wants to take Takara from Itachi to make him choose between the two....custody of Takara or Neji...
Sasuke & Naruto....with his music....& I know you can write normal situational scenarios....but i'd love to see your citrus skills in this fic ; )
About the epilogue...you already know my answer on that one....but I'm thinkin....sequelogue....more More MORE MORE!!! I loved this fic the best because it was steady...not...(well i think) like one update...then 20 years later Oh! i forgot about this little sucker *update 20 years later* Y'know? So i didn't feel like i hadda go back & read the last chapter to remind me of what happened. It had enough flirtation to keep me coming back....normally it's sex....but this was okay...because your characters were right on! If Sasuke had been a skribbler & was like Naruto...i would have been like 'NEXT!' Buuuut they weren't so-.....Gahh! I'm ranting...
Anywhozle this one won't be as long as the last....but it's something! Thanks for your equally long review though...you helped me see some things I've lost sight of....i knew i was loosing focus, but i was just trying to figure out where i could bring some old stuff back up....eh...I'll figure it out....Sooo if you read the review i just posted like 20 minutes ago...i accidentally posted the same review twice...so i deleted one...& it ended up deleting them both....so i hadda re-write it...but if you don't know what the hell i'm talking about, enjoy your review!
Thanks again!♥
Love ya!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah i just noticed...that that review was in fact, just as long as the last...if not longer lmao!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think an epilougue would be great!! as well as a lemon....? What'cha think????
I love this fic, I swear I was screaming "I Hate Sai" at my computer every time he came into the fic....
I love it when a story is interactive like that!!!!
I love this fic, I swear I was screaming "I Hate Sai" at my computer every time he came into the fic....
I love it when a story is interactive like that!!!!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic from start to finish... especially the finish... Sai cracked me up, he came out of all of this a richer man. I can only wonder about his new assignment now... poor Sakura. LOL.
As for an epilogue, I would like to see one... maybe with a *cough*lemon*cough*...
Well thanks so much for sharing such and amazing story.
-Akiru-
As for an epilogue, I would like to see one... maybe with a *cough*lemon*cough*...
Well thanks so much for sharing such and amazing story.
-Akiru-
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DEFINITELY!!! I have to read just a little bit more before I can put my mind to rest about this story!! Hmmm, wonder if Itachi and Neji ever got together and OMG the wedding of course!! And the relationship evolving!! SO SO MUCH!! So please very much write once again because that would make me and other readers very happy!