rate_review Reviews

I loved the plot of this story, and I would really like an epilogue. There you have it. I would like to be more descriptive and tell you exactly what I loved about this story, but I'm afraid that would take up entirely too much space. Suffice to say I loved everything. I hope you keep writing. Sad to see a good story end.

Chishio

Heh, so Itachi was on it too. Figures. I would like an epilogue because they you could add some Itachi/Neji exchanges, how Sai deal with Sakura (as a very minor note though) and maybe the wedding of Naruto and Sasuke?
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This was just as wonderful a story as Art and Artifice. I'm not sure on an epilogue...but I think you could easily make a little sequel for this. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship panning out, Itachi and Neji, Sai and Sakura. Sounds like sequel material to me!

That was just the cutest and most perfect story ever! You just have to make an epilogue to make even more perfect. Hopefully with a bit of honeymoon action too! ;)

Great fic so far :)

Even though the end was sweet it seemed like there was lack of closure with Sasuke and his father... at least for it to be a truly happy ending. I'd love to see peace within the Uchiha estate somehow worked into an epilogue (one hopefully filled with cheese and waff like you promised *hearts in eyes*) Please please please don't get upset with my crit!!! I LOVE your story, and would be just as content if there were no epilogue. But if there *is* an epilogue, I just hope that it will also wrap up the family issues ^__^;;

I'm really looking forward to reading your future submissions as well. Whatever you choose to do, thank you soooo much for this fic! The read from start to finish was nothing short of enjoyable. And claps on Zee_Kay for her review, it's hard not share her sentiment when reading your work.

Yes please write an epilogue.

I really love the story. I hope you will write the epilogue. *hopes real hard for a wedding*. Great story.

First, thanks for forgiving my stupidity. You can bet that I made sure to read EVERYTHING this time!
Beautiful ending! I loved the Itachi factor! LOVED IT!
Speaking of love, I'd love to see an epilouge where Sasuke is fulfilling his dream career with Naruto by his side. That was one of my favorite chapters when Naruto creates the treasure hunt picnic for Sasuke... that was AWESOME.

I like how you ended this. This whole story was nicely written. Nice work.