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by vanessaclarke

person ringpop
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, let me start by saying: This IS my favorite fanfic not second third or three quarters. There's no ifs, ands or buts about it. I can't believe I'm saying this because a few weeks ago i would have said some other fic was.

I love you as a writer.... You're comedic, witty, intelligent and able to convey the perfect reactions from your characters. I can't really remember, but i think you've responded to a few reviews...(idk after i'm done with this mini novel i'll go check....i better not be wrong or i'll have to erase this part of the review lmao) Unlike some of the extremely popular authors on this site, you actually give feedback....I've written two famous authors -in the Male/Male section on AFF- (I won't say who, but i'm sure some of the ppl reading this review & have done the same things i have, know who I'm talking about) on so many accounts, it's sickening. Their ignorance to my review & stalker e-mails (lmao...NOT) really upsets me... I mean, how could you be like that to a fan? Someone who makes you? I just can't seem to grasp the concept of that thinking. If someone praised my writing as much as i used to theirs, I'd be so flattered you'd think i was run over by a damn steamroller! I like praise myself, so naturally i like to give it too. I like to do random acts of kindness, so when people aren't kind to me it hurts my feelings :' ( (heheh what a baby!)

I admire you as a writer....I once felt as you did with my own fic Mr. Right. You felt in the beginning that this fic was totally awesome and it practically wrote itself, then it started to loose it's kick. I felt that SAME way, still do, but

I envy you as a writer....because you're still going! I'm still going, but not nearly as strong as you are. You say that it's lost it's fizz but it's STILL FUCKING GOOD! Like so amazingly good, i can't even explain!! You really have no idea how much i love to see this fic updated. I've read so many damn fics in the past few weeks this is the only one i actually LOOK for to see if it's been updated (sorry other authors) Mine on the other hand has pretty much hit rock bottom. Your story is so well outlined, so many things can happen from here. But i can't move an inch in the other direction with mine. You come up with the most plausible scenarios it's kind of unnerving....like this's really happened before & you're just rewriting it.....no matter...I'm still SOOO ENVIOUS!!

I hate you as a writer...BECAUSE YOU'RE SOO MUCHH BETTER THANN MEEE!

Which brings me to my conclusion.

Dagget?



*suspense*



You are my favorite author

Thanks soooo much for keeping this fic going. I would have been devastated if you hadn't
It saddens me to know that you're cutting this fic short because you don't think it's doing well *cry* But i know EXACTLY how you're feeling on this one.....nothing can change your decision, but a good idea....I hope it comes before it's too late!
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...............What a loser. I just wasted half my life writing something you're probably thinkin' umm 'Cyber security' Hahaha hope not! & I hope my little HEARTFELT monologue was of some encouragement...You're definitely an inspiration to me.

Thank You


Uuuh!*all up in yo face* take that all you short reviewin' sukkuuuhhhs!!!!

I win!
person LadyWolf
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SAI DESERVERD THAT!!!!! I know one thing Sasuke better tell the blonde somethin' soon or the proverbal shit will hit the fan!!!

I love this fic!!!!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you kept plugging along! This is such a cool story and I would definitely be one of the ones wailing and gnashing my teeth if you discontinued it lol. I look forward to reading the rest of the story!
person Meikyuu
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lurve your story, dagget. It's currently on my list of top faves (not just my list of top fics!) I love that Naruto is not an idiot and that he's on to Sai, and I feel terrible for Sasuke because he doesn't know this, because we all know that so long as he doesn't know this, he's going to be a wreck.

Granted he deserves it ^_^;;

but still...

You made me want to hurt Sakura-chan.

Please please please please update... Your readers await you!
person inumoon3
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man...I think Sasuke should just come clean and tell Naruto and hope Naru-chan doesn't leave him...honesty is the key! Can't wait to read more!
person qwerty
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Itachi! Argh! Sasuke's being so stupid. He should tell Naruto now, and that way, he takes away Sai's power over himself. But OF COURSE Sasuke won't do that; Naruto will find out and get sad, and then they'll make up. *sigh* I hope you're story won't be as predictable as that. I really like this story and absolutely love Takara.
update!
person Ordained
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Nothing better than a jealous Sasuke. XD
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A lover's tug-of-war. (It's way past a triangle)
person Anaheyla
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Watch out for that Sai, Naruto. Bad road! Bad road!

Also, yay! Neji and Itachi sittin' in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.
person lo
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. OHHHHHH the drama! I can't wait to see more.