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by vanessaclarke

schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be rather funny if Itachi and/or Neji managed to hear Sasuke and Sai's little "conversation". A situation like this just begs to be blown wide open. I can't say I've ever seen an Ita/Neji pairing but they're both damned sexy so I think it'd work out just fine.
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!!! Loved it!! It's cool that Itachi is interested in Neji now and those two can have a romance. I'm glad that Sai decided to pursue Naruto for himself so that Sasuke has become determined to be with Naruto. Should be a great battle!! :D
person Clow Angel
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. o.o; Sweet! A new chapter! ^^; Since I found the new chapter here instead of FFnet, I'll be reviewing here. ^_^ Great chapter once again! I'm happy Sasuke finally decided to cut things off with Sai. Even happier that Sai is finally being a true villain. I love Sai's character. In the anime, he's hilarious. In your fanfic, he's soooo frustrating! Hahahaha! It's great!

Oh, another genius idea of yours is the little bit of ItachixNeji you had going there. O.O I surprisingly loved it even if that pairing has never before crossed my mind. It was...'sexy'. Hahaha! And finally, bye bye bitch called Itachi's wife! ^-^

Keep it up! You know I'll keep reading and reviewing. Like always. =)
person andi
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm... i see itachixneji action in the near (hopefully) future. :]]]]
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. What an interesting twist going on with Itachi. It would be interesting if Itachi ended up with Neji and Sasuke with Naruto. They would be able to see each other (as friends only of course) all the time just like they did before Naruto got engaged to Sasuke.

I enjoyed this chapter. I'm curious what is going to happen when Naruto finds out. I would like to think that he has fallen in love with Sasuke and that he will be able to understand once Sasuke explains the whole meaning behind why he 'hired' Sai in the first place. After all he is feeling guilty to because he feels like he is lying to Sasuke with having Neji there for his input into what he feels about the whole situation.

Anyway, I love this story and I am looking forward to your next update.
person Kodos
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaha I L♥VE it!!! The last line of the first chapter had me laughing nearly to tears, and I've just spent the last 2 hours reading this whole thing. I like it a lot. I'm really hoping for some Sasuke/Naruto "moments" soon, hint hint. I think Sasuke should quit while he's ahead and pay Sai to disappear and never hit on Naruto again. Of course, Sai by this point in time may tell Sasuke that he wants to score with Naruto and blackmail Sasuke into complying. Oo;;; But I don't see how Sasuke could stand Sai hitting on Naruto any longer. Anyway, I look forward to your next update!
person inumoon3
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great!!! GO Neji...defending Naru-chan the way he did! Man...I can't but help to feel as if Sasuke should have been the one to do that though...hmm...well update soon!!!!
person Clow Angel
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was going to review this on ffnet, but it seems there's something wrong with FFnet right now. Therefore, I'll review here. ^-^ *Ahem*

OMG!!! Neji finally showed up! Thank you! I love you! Well, really I love Neji, but since you're the author and therefore only you can make him make an appearance, I suppose I'll extend some of that love to you too. Heehee. Yeah, I really loved how you portrayed Neji. You wrote his character impeccably well, really! It wasn't the least bit awkward. The Takara and Neji interaction was an unexpected but pleasant surprise too. My favorite part was definitely where Neji put Haruno in her place. ^_^ Muahahaha! I had such a vivid scene of that part play out in my mind. It was amazing! Keep it up! Oh, and I hope Sasuke and Naruto make some progress soon. >>; Sai is really starting to annoy me.
person Chria
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two thumb ups for this chapter! It's the best written so far. I loved that Sakura got what was coming to her. It was funny when she started accusing Naruto of building a harem. lol
person lo
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the tension,great job. It has me on the edge of my seet. I hope the Itachi can find some happiness in this story. Any way, I can't wait to see more of this and keep up the good work.