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for Full Circle

by vanessaclarke

person cynaga
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, nice, nice but a bit slow moving...
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. I missed you while you were gone. Silly Sasuke needs to jump on Naruto before he gets away.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAH!! Dunno what to say XD Awesome story so far. update soon. I really really wanna see where this is going.
You have made the characters good. I mean they are fitting XD that didn't explain it any futher sorry. XD

-Minna-chan
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Naruto since he didn't do anything at all. And for Sakura to bash him like that just because she was upset with Sasuke was just plain wrong on her part. Very immature as well since as Neji said, she was a guest in someone else's home for dinner. I wonder what her parents must think of her behavior. Would love to read what happened to her after they took their leave.

Will Sasuke finally tell Sai that he isn't interested in fulfilling his plan anymore and that he shouldn't come around at all?

I am so proud of Neji for standing up for Naruto and I really loved the part in the room where Sasuke thought that Neji and Naruto were doing something when Naruto was enjoying his "canoli". LOL that was hiliarous.

I look forward to your next update.
person Anaheyla
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GO NEJI!!!!! Tell that Sakura whore like it is!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Sasuke defended Naruto when Sakura was being a bitch. I also think it's cute how Takara has made Neji into his idol. :D Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person kati
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha i just read your entire story, and the subtle humor had me in fits! I really hope someone tells Sai to BUGGER OFF. ^_^ Go Neji! It was like -- "Oh, no, he didn't!" lol
person Lila
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off thanks for the double update (bows respctfully)...........Now i want MORE!!!!!!.............when you can of course :).............. i just want sasuke to tell Sai to fuck off and him to get with the smexin of his fiance' XD
person Raina
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised at myself for not reviewing this sooner! Though I do suck when it comes to giving reviews, but as a budding authoress myself (still got a lot to learn) I realize that feedback is important.

I just want you to know that this story is wonderfully adorable and I love how you have Sasuke wavering in the land of denial. Takara is so dang cute! And I absolutely loved the treasure hunt, Naruto is just so... *huggles* As for Sai, he is such a conniving jackass, but well... that's what he's paid for. Can I tell you how much I am loving that Neji is there now?

This story is so wonderful, I can't wait till your next update

-Rai
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the two new chapters!! I'm glad Sasuke is really feeling the guilt and regret for how he's treated Naruto. You did great with using Neji to help Sasuke see his feelings even more. I wonder if Neji will figure out what is up with Sai after he meets him.