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by Sapphirexkat2

person SGOU
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I LOVED it. It was totally awesome.
person YaoiFan!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I just found this fic and it was so hot!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was fun; sure the sex-scenes were not very realistic but I guess I can live with that. It's just porn after all! *laugh* But I laughed a lot at the idea of Itachi leaving Sasuke in Naruto's care. *snicker*
person Word_Slave
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to agreeeeeee..... mooooorrrrrreeeee.
Um please.
It was great.
Slave
person Astrid
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN.....thats all that was running through my head, since the end of the first chapter into the next. You write a perfect Uke sasuke, a definit Emo bastard till he gets his cock lol. I'm normaly iffy about what Uchihacest fics I read, because that pairing can be done so wrong. but your awsome! I really hope your Muse lets you write more.

Ja ne!
person charmpit
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is INSANE! Normally I won't read Uchihacest but for this one I made an exception based on a recommendation and I'm not sorry I did. VERY well written!
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! Allys was right! You outdid yourself in a freakin' awesome way! This is some hot hot storytellin' my friend. I love me some Uchihacest, and I can't wait to read Part II! Itachi, Sasuke and Naruto three way - *dies*. The way you describe Sasuke riding Naruto and sucking Itachi... wow. Just Wow!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful AU story. I was a bit sketchy about it at first, but you wroteit beautifully. I look forward to more of your stories.
person blueh
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just went to heaven and back. I really wish to read more if possible. >.< It's just so hot!! You're really good with threesomes. I usually don't look for threesomes but ItaNaruSasu was hard to pass and after reading it, I'd say it went beyond me expectation. It was just so hot! and I think I'm gonna start reading all your stories. ^^ You've got yourself a new fan.
person Chrysler
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep, Naruto is ALWAYS right and I'm glad for that too. Gah! Too bad Itachi won't be part of the show anymore but Naruto will do fine all on his own. I just love this characterization you have going with Sasuske, always horny, slutty, dead sexy................yummy! Mmm! I'm on the road to learning how to write better intimate scenes. You're PWP lessons are entertaining and highly educational and my clock is also telling me very addictive. The corporate office, mood swings........it too good! I don't know what I'll do when I finish all your Naruto fics. Probably get into the video games just to read something by you or research it. I just can't stop reading, I love it all and the threesome idea...again, I just don't feel the attention is directed enough so I tended to hate it......new favorite couple list is growing and it has a threesome in it. It was wonderfully written and when Naruto and Sasuke gave Itachi head--yum--I have to say, very realistic and nitty gritty and tremendously alluring. I always tend to see near rape hard sex or poetic sex and this has great flow but I love how realistic and pornographic and still quite sexy this is. Why censor? It's what makes it more appealing (You can tell I just learnt my lesson) But seriously....I'm surprised you're not a man. (An experienced man)