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... Im curious

...Threesomes are not your forte? THREESOMES ARE NOT YOUR FORTE??!! ARE YOU MAD!! YOUR FUCKING BRILLIANT! This was sooooooo hot and sexy as hell. You almost made me die!! Wow...now I mean wow you got some talent here. This story was absolutely amazing as anything and if you continue it i'll love you forever. Just the writing style and how you planned it all out was just mind-blowing. Wow....wow thats all I gotta say. Please please update I crave more!!

*heavenly chior* AHHHHHHHHHHHH DEEEELICIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. You're not kidding. That is a lot of sex. Nice job, even if you say threesomes aren't your thing. I can't write them to save my hide, so I stay well away. Keep up the good work.

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a/j

OMG, this was so damn hot!! Loved to see the three of them together.. that has been a long standing fetish of mine, lol, and you have done it wonderfully!! /fans self...

Awesome story!!!

well..that was certaintly...effing AMAZING!!! Damn...still trying to learn how to breathe after that one....wow.......-passes out from blood loss-....

LOL, for something that's not your forte you did it Beautifully XD. If slutty Sasuke isn't the hottest thing in the World. Nothing is XD. And omg not just Naruto, and not just Itachi, but both of them. This is beyond priceless. You know I want more XD. LOL, I'll help you if you want XD, give you idea and positions and such. Or I can just direct you into the path of some really excellent threesomes XD. LOL, you haven't rocked my world, you've knocked my world off its rocker and send it rolling down the road XD. THANK YOU. Bows low and kisses Kitty's feet. Ja na, XD.

I thought this was well done, it definitely set the mood for me haha... I would like to read what happens after, once sasuke finds out itachi is no longer there? How will Naruto manage with Sasuke? Will he feel a bit insecured and used as a substitute for sasuke, or will they face other obstacles? I think this story has a lot of potential as a beginning of a plot for something longer. But it was good as a twoshot. good job!

Dude you soo kick ass!! i really love this story. you should deffinately write more to it!! pretty please?!?!

That was so hot!! I'm fanning myself here.

I hope you do a sequel.