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by Sapphirexkat2

person Vivi & Venny
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vivi: ......I love you. And your amazing smut skills.

Venny: I love you MORE!

Vivi: No, I do.

Venny: No, ME!

Vivi:...... w/e. SO! Oh amazing one with the skills to make mind blowing ItachiXSasuXNaru smut! We love you!

Venny: -bows down- I am not worthy.

Vivi: O.O ....and you just took it to far, Venny. -draggs him away-

Venny: NOOOOOO!! -kicks his legs, and screams-

Vivi: Ja~!

~Vivi&Venny
person Dark Catalest
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the shit. Right now. I would love to hear what happens next or something along those lines.
person amberblood
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies of bloodloss* outstanding...*dies again*
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! I love this story... er smut... same difference! It was really well written and I can't wait for another chapter! Luv to you!
person LadyApollonia
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think there should be more. I wanna see Sasuke's reaction to Itachi leaving. I also wanna see how Naruto enjoys his new position at work. hehe
person Allys
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoily Shitt!! There's a part two?? I'm gonna die of loss of blood :swallows hard: but Damn, what a GOOD way to go!! LOL, How the fuck did I miss this O.o, well I definitely won't be missing the second one I can tell you that! That was AMAZING Kitty, ZOMG!!! I am completely blown away here and about to go rec this to everyone!!! LOL. Thank you SO MUCH for writing this!! The three of them together is just too good, especially when you write it XD :Glomps and huggles:
person animehead
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*is speechless* That... that... oh God that was good. I don't know what to say. I think I died when reading this. Maybe I'll join the world of the living when the second parts comes. *goes to smexy yaoi heaven*
person Jerith
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^awesome!!! i LOVED it. i don't think i've ever fallen for an AU UchihacestxNaru before. lol you're a very good writer, so keep writing, even if it is smut. lol^^ and update soon!!!
person cynaga
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Way HOT~!
person amberblood
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools muchly* oh please make a part two! I definately do want! ^^ This was extrememly well written. I've noticed that many of these PWP's aren't...but this one is fantastic!