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for Mirror, Mirror

by hightojo

person Ikippiki
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Iruka, I can't wait to see where this story is going even if I kinda know already, I'm sure you have lots of surprises in store for us! The smex scenes are hot! Please continue this story and update soon!
Nice work!
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story. Is there more? I adore Kakashi x Iruka. So sweet and hot. Mmmm. Mmmm. Mmmm.
person Zigana
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How come chapters 10 and 11 are the same? Love this story by the way.
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm a promise kept... and oh what a promise!! YEAH!! *oops nosebleed*
person Zigana
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi is so screwed if he really thinks Iruka will not remember in the morning.
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wish Kurosaki had suffered....alot. damn him for hurting Iruka....GRRRRRRRR. but great chapter i cant wait to see how Kakashi and Iruka fair in the next one...so pls update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While you do have a good base for a story, the constant errors in spelling, tense and grammar are making it difficult to enjoy. If you can't find a beta to help you, at least use spell check and then read it through for errors. It would turn a good story into an excellent story.
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor Iruka... this is a great story. Please keep it up.
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY KAKASHI!!! though i wish he had tortured Kurosaki for an eternity of pain and immeasurable suffering for trying to rape Iruka. but thats just me so moving on im glad Kakashi and Iruka have confessed their feelings for each other. please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, they are soooo cute!!