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for Living Another Life

by Ellel2000

schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is pretty awsome and i cant wait to see how the mission turns out!
person Kilrath
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i like that you continued this story finally and as far as what to do for the next few chapters only one thing can really be certain from what youve already written, something is going to go very badly on the mission.

Perhaps you could have the two of them run into sasuke or naruto or even both fighting.

In reality though its all up to you
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really enjoyed that it was really good i do hope you continue i can not wait update soon
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No Naruto!!!!!!!Poor guy

great chapter, just curious what's the pairings