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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reallt like it. Nice twist. I never considered throwing the Naruto' charas into a Guardien-like world. Very creative! I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next. And is Sasuke gonna show up soon?
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Poor Naruto! Ohh that was Sasuke yeah? Please update soon I really love this story! :)
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's cute. I would think that Iruka's animal would be a dolphin all because Iruka means dolphin in japanese. So it would only make sense. This is great && keep it up!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what you hve set up and so far the writing is very good. Nice job!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please continue!!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is okay. I will be looking forward to your updates on AFF and FF. Now, I really liked this chapter. Was that Sasuke that was petting him. Poor Naruto he must be in extreme pain, I wonder what is causing it.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - Great first 3 chapters!!! I am looking forward to the rest of the story. I just love Iruka, and the young Naruto is soooo sweet. It really seems that you have several interesting plot devices going.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. ^^
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! This story is just so adorable Eight-year-old Naruto makes me want to pinch his cheeks! There is a lot of creativity behind this story and I can't wait to see how it develops. Also, I can't wait till Naruto and Sasuke meet! Please update soon:)