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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Very Zrina-ish!!!! *two thumbs up*
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Inanely cute way to end something this funny. And.. *cough* HOT.
*is done*
-NN
Thank-you for writing!
*is done*
-NN
Thank-you for writing!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm, very nice, verry nice. ^^ I love how you kept them in character, you actually did a great job at picturing them. I'd love to read more, i hope you're planning on a sequel. XD
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mhm.. I like it.
Always try to avoid going on those trains when everybody else does, hate when people pressing into me. And it's always so warm! But I can feel Naruto's frustation. Like he said; boys have needs. *laugh* At least when they stand that close to someone they really want. So hard to actually have someone but at the same time don't have them. *bite lip*
Like the ending as well. Sasuke it so great sometimes. *smiles*
Thanks for a good story.
Always try to avoid going on those trains when everybody else does, hate when people pressing into me. And it's always so warm! But I can feel Naruto's frustation. Like he said; boys have needs. *laugh* At least when they stand that close to someone they really want. So hard to actually have someone but at the same time don't have them. *bite lip*
Like the ending as well. Sasuke it so great sometimes. *smiles*
Thanks for a good story.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so sweet. Loved it!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN, but I loved the end of this! I loved it I loved it I LOVED it.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... >_>... Damnit.
Well, *YOU*, Adichi, have ME into this now. GODDAMN YOU AND YOUR DISEASE SPREADING ILLNESS!! ARGH!
I loved it! It was hot and... *goes to die* I hate you so much right now. SO much.
-Dembo
Well, *YOU*, Adichi, have ME into this now. GODDAMN YOU AND YOUR DISEASE SPREADING ILLNESS!! ARGH!
I loved it! It was hot and... *goes to die* I hate you so much right now. SO much.
-Dembo
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy!! xD
And extra points to you for having it set in the UK instead of usa!! I thought that would *never* happen!
And extra points to you for having it set in the UK instead of usa!! I thought that would *never* happen!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After reviewing 'The Id and the Super-ego'
I just checked your profile for other stories you had written
because that fic was too good!
Anyways, man.. you sullied one thing I thought
NO ONE would ever think to taint xDD
And I mean that in the BEST way~
I'll never ride the train the same way again!!
xD
And that's saying something,
since I live in NYC and all.
And the only form of transporation I prefer
is public trains and buses~
(Cars are okay, but the drivers and traffic is horrible)
When I was reading along, I was wondering
how could people NOT notice two hot guys nearly having sex
in a crowded train car.
But then I realized, I'm not entirely paying attention much
when I'm riding the train either. I just have my iPod blaring some Jrock,
To tune out the ridiculous crap you hear people talk about.
So, I'm sure I'd kept my eyes peeled from now on xD
Man, and I have YOU to thank.
So--thank you~ =3
Awesome fic, too cute and VERY in-character.
Which I couldn't love more, even if I tried.
And I'm trying, believe me! xD
Keep coming out with more awesome fics,
your talent isn't something that should be wasted.
Its for the better of the SasuNaruSasu community!
(again)Much love to you for this wonderful piece of work~
I just checked your profile for other stories you had written
because that fic was too good!
Anyways, man.. you sullied one thing I thought
NO ONE would ever think to taint xDD
And I mean that in the BEST way~
I'll never ride the train the same way again!!
xD
And that's saying something,
since I live in NYC and all.
And the only form of transporation I prefer
is public trains and buses~
(Cars are okay, but the drivers and traffic is horrible)
When I was reading along, I was wondering
how could people NOT notice two hot guys nearly having sex
in a crowded train car.
But then I realized, I'm not entirely paying attention much
when I'm riding the train either. I just have my iPod blaring some Jrock,
To tune out the ridiculous crap you hear people talk about.
So, I'm sure I'd kept my eyes peeled from now on xD
Man, and I have YOU to thank.
So--thank you~ =3
Awesome fic, too cute and VERY in-character.
Which I couldn't love more, even if I tried.
And I'm trying, believe me! xD
Keep coming out with more awesome fics,
your talent isn't something that should be wasted.
Its for the better of the SasuNaruSasu community!
(again)Much love to you for this wonderful piece of work~
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke on the bus in his own cum--oh poor baby! I love the kisses at the end--so romantic!!
Very in character!
Thanks for the notice!!
Very in character!
Thanks for the notice!!