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Oh GOD, I've been waiting for months until this moment arrived that somebody has finally posted up an Exhibitionist!Sasuke in a public transportation scene!!! It wasn't what I wanted, like PWP adulterated smut, but it was one hell of a start XD

I hope you do more of these (with sex =)

Heh it was great!!! :D I know all about London trains *glares* the thing I hate the most is when there's no damn space and everyone seems to think they can still open their newspapers inside it *glares some more* anyway loooool :D it's a shame nothing like that's happened to me at rush hour loool I'll keep it in mind for furture refrence lol :D but it was great, I also liked how you managed to work in the sense of their relationship so it felt that it wasn't just about them grinding up against each other on the train. But heh - it was hot ^_^ Thanks for this it was really good ^_6

Hina xXxx

aww! so cute! great job!

That was clever and sweet. Nice job even for a pwp, you really made something.

Very nice. Loved the humor (especially at the beginning).

YES! I have this thing (obsession) for AU, modern day stories containing Naruto and Sasuke, and well any character from the Naruto verse I suppose. This was exceptional! As I adore NaruSasu, their relationship is even better in an AU. The descriptions were wonderful and they were immensely IC I had a hard time keeping in mind that this was a fanfic and not an actual manga/anime out there. *hearts* I will continue to look forward to more of your stories. You are no longer safe. XD

Heh, that was pretty damn HOT! God I love it when Naruto’s aggressive! This story totally rocked!!!

Hiyas, sweety! Since I didn't get to see you online tonight, I decided to post my review here! I just wanted to say that it is sweet, cute, awkward and so much like real life. They have issues and while some touching is nice and helps progress things, all their problems aren't resolved through a wild bout of sex. Real life doesn't work that way (though sometimes I wish it did, lol). I think this piece really reflected that. Their relationship is something that they will have to work on step by step!!

*loves on you!*