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for Where the hell's MY flashback?!

by KageKitsuneXXX

schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I can't stop laughing. My chest, omg my chest hurts so much. This was so fucking surreal what with Sakura punching and breaking the flashback and Yamato quickly flipping through the manga trying to figure out wth to do next. I love it, I love it all. The fight between Naruto and Sasuke to determine who would be uke was freaking cute and the little interruptions they kept making made me want to V8 smack Sasuke. The fact that Sasuke had the nerve to glare at Sakura upside down, had me first go, wtf pose is he in now before laughing so hard I nearly wheezed as Sasuke promptly removed the pink problem and declaring that a worthy flashback. I love this so much, you are one talented author.
person anon
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your timing, as always, is utterly brilliant. My favorite part was sasuke struggling against screaming naruto's name, and then not remembering what they had been arguing about...indeed, not remembering anything except naruto's name. So many perfect moments in here...his glare being diminished by virtue of being upside down... all in all you are simply a joy to read. Please, don't stop! DON'T STOP! er, I mean don't stop writing narusasu. Love you!
person Kerrisa
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol yay for funnyness in the morning xD I just woke up, and after reading chp 41 of Kuroshitsuji,I was back to reading yaoi fanfics, I think I may have an unhealthy obsession. This story was super fun and got me thinking about the lack of Sakura flashbacks, but you know what? it really doesn't matter, 'cuz the anime/manga is called "Naruto" not "Sakura" had someone pointed this out to her in the fic, I'm sure more destruction would have ensued. I'm making my way through all your fics, I think I have 2 oneshots left before I'll start your multichaps =] Looking forward to them all! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person babe
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!! Hilarious. Good one. I don't like Sakura at all. Like reading stuff with some bashing on that pink thing, now and then. Thanks!
person Leeana69
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto flashback 15 - The stripteast version!! LAWL.

I seriously laughed my ass off at that, and I have to join in on Naruto's hilarious laughter or projectile vomiting on the Snake oil made by Creepy Snake man. Ew. :X

Awesome Story, I enjoy all your work, though I'd have to say Role Play is a personal favorite. Keep up the awesome writing. ^-^
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my lord, this is freakin' hilarious! It's so rare to find a fic that actually has me laughing out loud at my computer! I absolutely loved it, and I'm glad I took the time to check out your other writings(I read Birthday Wishes right before this-also awesome, btw.) I always appreciate fics with a lot of good humor in them; I think some people hesitate to write funny stories because they're not sure that their type of humor will translate well(at least, that's what I was afraid of), so it's always awesome to see someone willing to take that leap!
person hsbs
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Sakura-chan, this isn’t what it looks like!” LMFAO!

That was frickin' hilarious. I love it. All of it.
person hsbs
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...and the Cartman moment: "Screw you guys, I’m going home!" I didnt realise Sakura would sound Canadian!
person Alkalph
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really funny ajjajaja indeed,i think that things should had happened like this in the manga chapter XD
person Sigart
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your crack rules my soul.

I love that you had Naruto topping. Face it; unless he got to top, there'd never be any sex because he'd refuse XD