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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Giggles as she falls out of her chair.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit you CRAZY person, that was Fucking FANTASTIC!!!! ROFLMAO!!! I don't even know where to start, I love everything about this XD. “Don’t you dare patronize me, you orange disaster!!” LOL, At first I was like, Is she/he just gonna go over the scene, and then Sakura punched through the mother F-ing flashback O.o, LMAO!! God and the Gaara flashbacks XD, my favourite has GOT to be the striptease version!!! Shut up you disco queen! OH God!!! LOL, and you made Sai Sakura's bitch!!! I love how you criticised the outfits, I got tears coming out of my eyes!! “Soooooo, how have you been?” :roll eyes: XD XD XD. Absolute fucking Comic Genius!! From beginning to end! I've got to fucking tell Adi XD. God, but you have the BEST argument for Naruto as Seme I've seen Anywhere XD, because Honestly when had he ever won an argument with Naruto when it mattered and without knocking him out? Bloody well NEVER!!! LMAO all over again. My blinking throat hurts! Naruto prudently decided to keep the wisecrack about Sasuke ‘ending up a sore loser to himself’ XD!!! Orochimaru as a lube manufacturer O.o - the Horror!! It's fucking Gut busting!! And then it the middle of all that it GOT HOTTT!! ROFL. I don't know what to do XD, but I have to say - Boy am I Glad you discovered yaoi XD! Holy Hell, please write again ;).
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was just so funny. I love it. The whole flashback part was great and I loved that Sakura was just pushed out the door after she fainted.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man I loved that! looooool you had me cracking up with the whole hissy fit that sakura threw and then when yamato pulled out the manga looool :D that was brilliant honestly - the smut was good too even if a pink fiend ruined the ending lol but hey since i'm not a skaura hater i'll let that pass :D it funny and with hotness involved, definitely good ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you nuts? That was fucking hot. And that was your first lemon, well I have to say you made me all hot and bothered. It was a great one-shot, especially at the end, with Sasuke's line. That was funny. And Naruto Seme, he he he, it was all very hot, I loved it.
Well done, and I hope to read more from you soon.
Ja.
Well done, and I hope to read more from you soon.
Ja.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!! Hell, If I were Sakura, I'd want a flashback of that last scene! Loved it!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I literally LAUGHED OUT LOUD! Gods, I haven't read a funny one-shot like this in a long time. It was perfect! Smexy too ;) I can't stop laughing. You got some talent there.
**Gaara himself was having his sixth…no seventh Naruto flashback since breakfast. ‘Uzumaki Naruto saved me from a life of loneliness…’ Yeah, we know- we freaking get it already.**
Lmao I choked on that one!
** Screw you guys, I'm going home!** Loved that!!
Please, please write more I'm addicted to your writing style!! Fantastic work!!
**Gaara himself was having his sixth…no seventh Naruto flashback since breakfast. ‘Uzumaki Naruto saved me from a life of loneliness…’ Yeah, we know- we freaking get it already.**
Lmao I choked on that one!
** Screw you guys, I'm going home!** Loved that!!
Please, please write more I'm addicted to your writing style!! Fantastic work!!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM