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by KageKitsuneXXX

person kaesaku
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, angsty~
well, if i were in sasuke's place, i would have made the same mistake..
couldn't concentrate much on word & logical thinking in that predicament..
hehehehe..
write soon! :)
person Nami
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know whether to laugh at Sasuke or say 'aw'. I'll do both at once and I think that will well encompass my feelings for him (humor, joy, sympathy, and other). Awwwwwww XD;... You're so stupid with contact, Sasuke. And poor Naruto not knowing. Geez, I can't wait for the explanation, 'sorry, I get a little retarded when you touch me D:'. ....d'aww. Angst though. XD I'm gonna re-read the little extra to cheer myself up (hurray for Naruto who knows Sasuke has the IQ of a pet rock!)
person Aice
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... where did you get all those ideas???
The 2nd virgin birth. Those are really hilarious.

To Sasuke: Don't give up yet.
To Naruto: Come on...give Sasuke a chance.
person Shishio_Not_Logged_In
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD Oh my God, your stories are always hilarious! I mean, your portrayal of a drunk Gaara, priceless! -Poor neighbor kids- Also, Gaara telling Naruto how he was going to 'painlessly' kill Sasuke, and then saying that he had diplomatic immunity! And at the end of chapter 10, where Naruto was leaving with Gaara and asking if he still had diplomatic immunity! -Busts out laughing-

~Fire
person Shishio_Not_Logged_In
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD Oh my God, your stories are always hilarious! I mean, your portrayal of a drunk Gaara, priceless! -Poor neighbor kids- Also, Gaara telling Naruto how he was going to 'painlessly' kill Sasuke, and then saying that he had diplomatic immunity! And at the end of chapter 10, where Naruto was leaving with Gaara and asking if he still had diplomatic immunity! -Busts out laughing-

~Fire
person digiditz
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods! This had better end well or ...umm... ok I can't really DO anything but I'll leave a very unhappy review!
person Adi
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I HATE AND LOVE YOU.

the beginning was so fucking funny, with the patients? and the nurse? and Kiba and Hinata? *falls over laughing* SO FUNNY

and then

you killed me

with the angsty smex "scratch that itch"

I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU DATTEBYO/BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!

it hurt KK!!!! make the pain go away

you had so better fix this soon, or I'm coming to get you! *no joke*

*bawls*

LOVED AND HATED THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anaheyla
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm torn between celebrating the new chapter and being angry at those angst filled plot-bunnies!

I'll do both.

Yay new chapter! *does the new chapter dance*

*is angry at the bunnies*

Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Allys
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, That was fantastic, angst included. You got hit by a hurricane love?? You live near me?? Do you live in the Caribbean?? Where do you live?? LOL, my nose has run away with me. In better news, I loved the radio rebellion XD. And everything following it. Can't really focus right now, but I feel really bad for Sasuke and Naruto. That really didn't go right did it. *Huggles them both* and hopes Gaara doesn't do anything too drastic. I hope you get everything organised soon *loves*.
person ladywolfTerri
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww man!! Poor Naru-chan.. but more so.. Poor Sasuke!!.. I mean seriously...he is trying so hard and then his body betraying him like that!!... hmm.. maybe he should start sending Naruto flowers.. yeah.. lots and lots of red roses, one step to show he cares!!... hmmm.. take him out to dinner.. somewhere mondo, super nice, and not expect anything... watch a movie and just cuddle.. come on! Sasuke has to get "jr" on a leash if he expects to win Naruto's heart over!!