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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Taylor
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM


*le sigh* Well, every fic has to has a downside. I try my best to stay away from angst, but sometimes it's unavoidable.....T_T

Anywany, this fic is freaking awesome. *slaps some sense into Sasuke's sex induced mind* WTF?! DUMBASS!?
Keep up the hilariously amazing job. *high five*

twistedneko@yahoo.com
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry about the hurricane but i have to say i was laughing my ass off for most of the chapter especially the djstarlight song thing and sasuke's pg-13 agony. i feel bad for naruto and i hope gaara uses his buttsex carrot to make naruto feel better. god what i would do to have a bishonen manservant.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I feel like sometimes your characters are straying into OOC (even for the fic), but it's still great. One of the best stories I've seen in a long time. I'll be checking back for more!
person Chria
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the angst was pretty sneaky there. I was cracking up until the deal came and then it became so serious. I really don't blame Sasuke because it really is hard to think and make decisions like that. It's like being drunk. Man, he's going to pay for it thought. Everything is moving along nicely. Much Love~
person kaesaku
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww~
gaara's not gonna have a longer exposure in this fic?
too bad.. but that's okay.
although i love narugaa, m'still more in love w/ narusasu~
write soon! :)
person Lila
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.. The people on this site update so quickly that it's hard to see when the stories i want to read are updated because they are knocked off the front page so quickly...So yeah can't wait for the next update...(squeals this is such a good story) XD
person Rosebud
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that you added Gaara in this chapter. Very nice! ^^
I also laughed my ass off about SALAD, your awesome honey! Keep it up and update soon!
person ur greatest fan
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! U're a genius! I wanna have ur babies!!
person getayaoilover
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME, can't wait for the next chapter, and the chapter after that, and after that....etc. I'm not asking for a full blown sex scene between naruto and gaara, (although it would be nice) i just want some more gaara/naruto action. By the way gaara drunk and serenading naruto, funny beyond a doubt, absolutely loved it!

(^_^)
person Seenni
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three Words.

You. Are. God.

Oh dear....

I. Have. Never. Laughed. So. Much.

Don't you dare stop this story!

If you do....my life will never ever be complete....

No pressure.

Much Love

Seenni