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by KageKitsuneXXX

person S_R
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grawr!! I want Sasuke and Naruto to get together~!!!!
Poor poor Sasuke, but I love everything you've had in the fic so far, including the masturbating at Naruto's voice, the random singing of the song, the names of the cars, Sasuke seeming like he's making a love potion or something. I love it all and the way you write, though I think there's a few spelling errors. *drools* I love Sasuke heaps and I want Naruto to stop being in denial!

Please update~ *puppy eyes*
person S_R
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grawr!! I want Sasuke and Naruto to get together~!!!!
Poor poor Sasuke, but I love everything you've had in the fic so far, including the masturbating at Naruto's voice, the random singing of the song, the names of the cars, Sasuke seeming like he's making a love potion or something. I love it all and the way you write, though I think there's a few spelling errors. *drools* I love Sasuke heaps and I want Naruto to stop being in denial!

Please update~ *puppy eyes*
person kocoum
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmfaaooo oh gosh. i love you. i already asked someone to have my babies, so will you have my hamster babies? :D
person Emmy
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story cracks me up. Thank you so much for going so far out of your way to indulge us! And for bringing back the Thong Song my brother used to play non-stop.
person kknjsidakota
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the way you had gaara was eprfect and as usual funny. i love how the charactors are ic and yet you have such funny scenes. i loved the little impromto sing and the idea of a lee heading the group. great chapter, great fic keep it up
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! your a fucking geneous! ( don´t know how to spell it but you are it! I lvoed it! god i nmeeded a good laough! thank youuu!!!
person Taylor
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
twistedneko@yahoo.com
I FREAKING LOVE YOOOU!
*glomp**smothers**drools**rinse and repeat*
You're an excellent author and I dont know how to express that to you enough, by means other than spazzing....soo..

*spazzes like no spazzer has ever spazzed before*

AWESOME job. Keep up the amazing work!
person Rendril
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love the story so far. It's hugely entertaining. I was thinking though, that maybe Sasuke needs a second love interest, someone who falls for him to make Naruto a bit jealous? Seems Naruto is a bit too sure of himself... ^^;; But I just wanted to say this story is great and I look forward to reading more. =D
person z
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
what a cute funny chapter. (i'm still on chapter one) but i'm really loving it so far.. poor sasuke.

ahahahaha.. this made me rofl.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant stop laughing at the idea of shikamaru singing >_< (officially is pronounced dead from lack of oxygen) and gaara is the smexy i wish you could put more of him in here. ^_^ i hope you find more time to write beacuse your are really creative and this story just plain old rocks!