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by KageKitsuneXXX

person kaesaku
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
..loves this chappie!
naruto in denial is really funny!
can't wait for the next one~
^_^
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omfg this is so brilliant and funny and adorable all at the same time. I still have this stupid grin on my face and no matter how I tried to smack it off it returns like a stupid boomerang to plaster itself back on my face. I thought I was going to have a heart attack when I saw Sasuke bringing in that female doppleganger into Naruto's garage. If I was Sasuke I would have dug my own hole in the ground instead of waiting for the ground to swallow me up. And when Naruto forgave him and played that incident off I was like omfg Sasuke has the devil's luck. But now I can so not look at Hinata the same again. I never knew she was such an undercover freak and I felt so sorry for Sasuke when that song played in the basement. I was like wow.. the universe didn't spit in his cheerios this morning they freaking peed in it too. And all the quirky little words you make are so cute and clever like when Lee was talking about how Sakura would have had him commit eyebrow suicide and stuff. And gah I could probably ramble on how much I love this story. I can't believe I hadn't read this story sooner. I'll be defintely looking forward to the next update. So okay, yeah, bye. ^^;
person LadyWolf
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked reading this chapter...you delved into the minds of both Naruto and Sasuke when they were going through there "life changes" I loved it!!!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm x-tra lemon was tasty and hilarious. teehee, sasuke's an idiot after sex, well it happens to the best of us. i agree about the fic itself not quite being ready for some smex, but surprise extra smex is never a bad choice ^.^

hope you update soon, poor boys have themself quite the little mess there -_-
person Anaheyla
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story.

I must know what happens next!

P.S. I thought we had a deal, no more angst, alot alot alot more shagging.
person LadyWolf
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was the funniest chapter! I've told people before, "It's those quiet ones ya have ta watch out for!"
person Taylor
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm your devoted fangirl from here, and forever on. I absolutely adore this fic, and I'm so high off of Narusasu sex, that I'm kinda spazzing. XD

Keep up the amazing work.*high fives*


twistedneko@yahoo.com

P.S. UKE SASUKE IS THE BEST THING EVAAAR.<3<3<3<3<3<3
person Bonnie
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are an evil master mind. Its 1:00 am I have to be in a very boring class in a few hours and I am deprived of sleep. That last part is your fault. I have this fic in my exclusive wait-to-be-completed-its-worth-it folder, please don't let us down or I'll murder a puppy.

I won't go to jail for that. And the puppy will still be dead.
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeee i love it i can't wait for chapter 9 there were so many funny parts i'm soooo happy someone is going on the funny side of things and not all angsty i have a teenage brother my life is already full of angst so thank you for being a comedian
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so good. i could actually see sasuke attempting to murder someone after being interrupted like that. i take it sasuke has already begun planning operation: molest naruto until he fucks me through a wall, yes? and i loved the extra bit too. it seems very much like a normal day in the lives of sasuke and naruto.