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by KageKitsuneXXX

person getayaoilover
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want chapter 9, it's a must, especially since this chapter didn't have a "the end" feel to it. But of course it was a wonderful chapter, and I loved the button part, "touche button, touche" that was awesome!

(^_^)
person amberblood
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah touché button, touché…


I died right about there. Old guy sex usually scares me too...though it might feel even better...prostates swell with age. O.o
person SasUke28
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol this is so damn funny!UPDATE SOON!
person ringpop
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe I ♥ this story....."Ah touché button, touché…" I was wondering when that button'd get it's revenge....honestly....when he ripped Naruto's shirt off i thought it'd fling off and pop him in the head lmao!!!
person hpnaruto
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I'm always looking forward to it.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love naruto's idisyncrasy (sp?) i'm the same way with barbie girl and one of my friends is teh same way with "bad touch" we're evil to each other beacuse of it to lol.
person lunajen
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD. You have to update this story!! I started reading and couldn't stop. Please update!
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

YIPPEE!

What fun this is! Each chapter gives on a little insight into each of the chaaracters motives.

1 - 5 - 7 are my favorites ~_^!

Looking forward to chapter 8!

I have never had so much fun in all my life...

Thank you for your wonderfully humorous and beautifully written story... ^_^!
person blueh
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O NoooOOOOoOOo... make Naruto accept Sasuke! :D I really enjoy your story. It's getting very interesting! Keep updating! Here's some cookies.
person Sigart
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Bloody hell, of [i]course[/i] I start reading this when you get to the chapter with the meanest possible cliffhanger. Ever. Bloody typical.

..Uhm, I suppose this means that I really like your story XD The bit with Hinata seriously had be in stitches laughing so hard. I expected every moment Sasuke to wake up and be like "Oh gawd, what a horrible nightmare... ARG! Naruto! He's with HER! *insert mad dash to save Naruto ending with something horribly embarassing*"
...something like that. Haha.

I also enjoy how you, despite the lack of very detailed Sasuke-angst (or perhaps because of it XD) manages to make him really, really miserable. But realistic miserable (because we all know deep down that boy don't cry. ...much). So yeah, I'm really enjoying this and seriously hoping you'll post the next chapter soon. Yah.