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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohmygad~
a confrontation, finally!
i like how you write their history as sidestories for each chapter..
i also think your dialogues are really witty.
do continue~
can;t wait for the next one!
^_^
a confrontation, finally!
i like how you write their history as sidestories for each chapter..
i also think your dialogues are really witty.
do continue~
can;t wait for the next one!
^_^
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was HOT!!!!!!
love the response, it was intense!
and i also love were this is going. sasu is going to have to work even harder now to covince naru that it can work. but i have a feeling that part of naru still feels betrayed by how sasu left him for so long before coming back from england. the fact that naru realized sasu loved him when he came back - means that naru loves him and what sasu said to him the day he went to england to get him back still hurts.
but he definitely loves sasu and has known it for a long time - why else respond the way he did to the kiss. can't wait for the next chapter!
love the response, it was intense!
and i also love were this is going. sasu is going to have to work even harder now to covince naru that it can work. but i have a feeling that part of naru still feels betrayed by how sasu left him for so long before coming back from england. the fact that naru realized sasu loved him when he came back - means that naru loves him and what sasu said to him the day he went to england to get him back still hurts.
but he definitely loves sasu and has known it for a long time - why else respond the way he did to the kiss. can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaah! it's so cute! I can't wait for the update. =D
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i realy like it and i just NEED to know what happens with them please keep writing please ...
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! This story is sooooo great!!!!!!
It's soooooooooooooo ooo oooo mean of you to leave it of there... I'm dying to know what will come next..... And Naruto.. that was mean of him!!! letting Sasuke suffer all that!!!! I hope you make him (Naruto) make it up to Susuke in chapter 8!!!
God, I can't wait.... you rock!!
It's soooooooooooooo ooo oooo mean of you to leave it of there... I'm dying to know what will come next..... And Naruto.. that was mean of him!!! letting Sasuke suffer all that!!!! I hope you make him (Naruto) make it up to Susuke in chapter 8!!!
God, I can't wait.... you rock!!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He didn’t need air- air, he declared, was for pussies. He wasn’t going to stop even if he passed out. Oxygen be damned. HAHA great stuff!! Awesome Chapter 7!! I loved the flash backs! You worked them in well. Keep it up! I hope you get around to posting chapter 8 sooner than a few weeks.. ^^ I'm loving this story!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Update this soooooon!!!!!!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This story is ab-fab! I loved the progression, the plot and even the angst! This has turned out to be an awesome story. Please continue...there has to be a resolution to the tension.
Xenobia
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was awsome! Don't worry about it. Thanks for the quick update too. :D
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Silly silly author XD. This isn't depressing at all, this is fantastic, it means the story goes on XD. And yes the grope session compensates, not to mention finding out the Naruto knew all along was the perfect twist. Cause I mean really, after that stunt in the beginning he would have had to be a complete idiot not to know. You did soooo GOOD!!!!!!!!! LOL, XD. I love that Arashi was Naruto, graciously SUPER-SIZED XD!! And that Sasuke was in love in Kindergarten, And that Sakura is a closet yaoi fangirl, and the whole tiny section about happy endings :waggles eyebrows: XD, LOL, Oh who am I kidding I loved it all XD. :glomps you: Thanks so much for the update, Ja.