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don't make us wait weeks please! for something that was supposed to be a oneshot, this turned into a pretty damned good story. and that was a god-awful place to end it. evil really. and making us wait too long for the follow up is even eviler (if that's even a word). ;)

lol you know this time I was thinking "If she makes it makes it all a dream I'm gonna hunt her down and show her what butt secks is" O_O! XD

IT WAS SO FREAKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

Of course when I found out that Naruto already knew, I then wanted to kill him and show him what butt secks is too

The kiddy flashbacks were so cute, so freaking adorable, images of lil Naru and Sasu made me go all "AWWWW!" Damn you! *shakes fist*

Don't you even think about ending this fic, EVER. I fully expect it go on for at least 60 chapters XD hey wait! Where you going? Stop running!

*dead* *cough* just went back to reread the smut scene, phew, that was pretty fucking hot, seriously, yeah, make them do it again!

I love the Sakura moments, I'm glad you don't bash her in this fic, and her yaoi fangirl moment :D XD

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I think I hate and love you at the same time. Chapter six made me cry FOUR times. I'm going to read the seventh one, so you'll be getting another review for that one, but I hope that it's at least as good as this one. *hugs you then smacks you* It was good. No worries of real hate...

a/j

Don't be sorry. It was a great chapter, even though you made me cry AGAIN! This just makes me hope for them even more, though. I'm not going to urge for updates. Get the next chapter perfect before you post. That's the only way you won't feel like it's not right. Gah. If I had any Sasuke or Naruto plushies, I'd be squeezing the life out of them right now. They're way too adorable, and even the angst is great. I <3 it.

a/j

this fic is so good but please i'm begging u put a god damned lemon in i'm dying please

Wow!! Definitely an amazing story! You are seriously a talented writer. I love your writing style and prowess and how you present and develope the Naruto characters. The story was neither taken to fast or too slow, and the way you progressed and made the story develope was ingenious!! I love it, love it, love it, love it!! This story is definitely one of my favs. The smexyness was really done well too ;P PLease update soon!

Wow, I love this story. Its so silly and sweet at the same time.

Also, I absolutely loved how you named Sasuke's care 'The Paradox.' Is that a refrence to something? Cause that is simply brilliant.

This fic is shit hot! It's got a little of everything and a 'little more' of the best things. XP I love Naruto's character (he makes a kick-ass doctor) and Sasuke's awesome too. His ooc-ness is all inward which makes it perfectly reasonable. You've got the humor, the angst, the sexiness and the fluff all nicely packaged for me. Dominatrix-Hinata was AWESOME, as was kindergarten-Naruto. LOL I loved every bit of this and I don't have one single negative comment. Even the spelling and grammar was problem free. (sigh) Just give me a moment of silent worship here..... Ok, I'm done now. But seriously that's some truly good writing. Thanks for sharing it! (hugs)

Later

OMG NARUTO IZ A PUZZY Y CAN'T HE ACCEPT HIZ LORV FROM SASUKE!"??????and update soon!

Oh yeah, I forgot to say (yeah... I'm here too, LOL! No, I'm not stalking you, I lost you weeks ago... yeah -shifty eyes- *hides further behind the bush*) The Golden Girls reference: excellent. Sakura Petrillo.

-Rai (~*Aikage*~)