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Fave Line:

Correction, Sasuke’s headache drained blissfully away, simply to return with reinforcements.

-- Darn those headaches and their reinforcements!! Lol i love Sasuke goes into erotic fantasy mode whenever Naruto puts his hands on him. I loved how Sasuke used Naruto's song against him (again)! lol devious. I was so surprised Sasuke got thrown out of the restaurant before he even did anything! Its for the best, I know, but still... darn you Sakura )= Looking forward to reading more soon!! I'm lovin it! XOXOXs Kei-Chan

I.LOVE.YOU. enough said..funny,charming, witty, angsty, heartwhenching, nervewracking, tears of joy. That is what you did to me, you great person you. I loved the songs also. Simple plan and hoobastank fitted SO WELL..I'm also following torrid. glad that i found you :D

For Chps 1 + 2

Fave Line:

"Sasuke cooled his voice so much; you could have chilled juice with it."

Your sense of humor tickles my sense of humor. I can't believe Naruto let him off the hook so easily for that Naruto double stunt and then had the audacity to ask out Hinata!! Okay, so maybe it is perfectly natural for him to ask out a cute girl, i just feel bad for poor Sasuke. Poor baby is suffering D= !! Okay, must read more, I shall continue to review between chapters 'cuz if saved it for the very end, I might end un short changing you or leaving a retardedly long review that might take awhile for you to read through... I've done it before. . . Until next time! XOXOXs Kei-Chan

Chapter Four.

There are so many good points to every chapter it's hard to just pick one. Though I'd have to say my favorite for this one was when Chouji tossed Sasuke out the back door of the restaurant. Good stuff.

Chapter Five.

And now some of my favorite scenes from this chapter.

“You really think someone’s about to take pity on you?”

“Shut up! It’s hardly a bad thing that, unlike some people, I don’t see women as cheap carnival rides!”

“Is that because there would be a ‘height’ requirement to get on?” - This one made me giggle profusely.


“What?! No… Sasuke, this song is just a dumb joke. Although I do agree with the part about girls throwing themselves at the angst-filled, bishounen gay guys. Think about it, high school girls, college women…yaoi fangirls!” (O.o;;) (¬.¬;;) (-.-;;) - So very true. -_-;;

>o< That was an awesome confession. Very manly. ^-^

I forgot to review the last chapter. Forgive me. T.T

Also, Gaara is amazing and I love him forever. Most people don't realize the 'ai' on his forehead doesn't mean 'Love' it means 'Property of Leeana69' XDDD

So I adore the line about dying for true love, it reminds me of 'The Princess Bride' The single best movie of all times.

And the part about the confession.....that is my all time favorite part of any story ever. I was thinking about it at work the other day and almost burst out laughing. I was doing a clients hair and I couldn't stop smirking. It was terrible, I blame it one you. XD

:happy sigh:

That was amazing, this is by far one of my all-time favorite stories. ^-^

Thumbs up for awesome writing.

I LOVE THIS STORY....I'm rereading it for about the tenth time and will now comment on every chapter.

P.S. This is Chapter one. ^-^