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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Luna_Meow
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was introduced to this story by an IRC friend, and it's really a nice story! I like how you keep everyone in character, suppressing Sasuke's feelings over Naruto, and when Sasuke eventually confessed... Angst chapters go angsty, funny ones are hilarious.... Okay, I just can't describe. Whatever.

Please keep it up! (That's what I really want to say *laughs*)
person Taylor
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Poor Naruto. Both of his parents went...just like that, in a very very possible way. Naruuuto. You DO realize that if you dont figure out that you lurve Sasuke, he could be gone just as quick. It's better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all...I supposed at least.
Awesome job on the fic. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :3

twistedneko@yahoo.com
person Shishio_Not_Logged_In
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! -Cheers- I love the story, absolutely adore it. You should really write a 7th chapter. We need to see this thing played out! Pweeaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?????????????????????????????????????????

-Offers up cookies of your choice.-
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so kick ass its funny as shit, and its so hard to find good naru/sasu. you you really put your mind to it naruto can be such a good seme. and personaly I think sasuke makes a perfect Uke. anyway you soo have to update soon, or I will be forced to cry and bombard your review page with nonsince, on why kakashi should never be a theropist. anyway hinata with her S&M fetish and kiba being her bitch was easly the funniest thing I have read in a long time, along with " everyone woman withen a 10 mile radius is now ne vogue, its clearly your fault sasuke". (will forever remeber that, very original). hope to read more soon.

Ja ne!
person Chria
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"It's been one week..." I love that plot gimmick. It's so awsome. And totally something IC. I also loved where Sasuke told Naruto he loved him in three different ways to make sure he gets his point across but I have a feeling that'll blow over Naruto's head ANYWAY! HAHAHAHA You're keeping your humor up. Don't worry. I'm ready for the angst now. :P
person Taylor
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking hilarious. Hinata was really reminding me of Eurotrip, the most hilarious movie on the face of the Earth. Anyway,this fic is just awesomely hilarious on so many levels. This is just so awesome. Keep up the good work!


twistedneko@yahoo.com
person Taylor
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*freaks out*
GAAH! This fic is sooo awesome! Man, you've really got me freaking out about it too. I cant wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :D

twistedneko@yahoo.com
person loki-sama
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the confession from sasuke. Its was manly and yet sweet at the same time. Also believable for their characters. Thanks.
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really can't wait to see how naruto's going to act. this has been a real entertaining story.
person Finnel
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~glomps poor sasuke~ awww!!! but we love your stupid duck-butt hair!!!
yay!!! he finally told him!!! ~does happy dance~
looking forward to the next update!!!
ja!