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by KageKitsuneXXX

schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! sasuke's finally told. in a damned funny way too. looking foward to the next update.
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'And you wonder why everyone has to go to such extremes just to escape you'

Sasuke... you... bastard O_O how could he say something like that?!?!?! man my chest just ached when he said that... but the confession at the end *smirks* helped a lot in helping me get over my anger at that line :D yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes pleasepleasepleaseplease PLEASE continue!!! i don't mind the angst - angst is good lol, makes the god moments even better ^_6... and uhh yeah... so, continue? please?

In any case, thanks for the update ^_^
Hina xXxx
person ringpop
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“You want the truth? You want the truth; you can’t handle the… argh!!” BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAAH YOU HAD ME ROLLIN!!![have i said that already?] I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY!!!!! I updated my story today & i was like this hoe better update too [ i hella advertised you on the 9th chapter @ the top] because you are a freaking GENIUS!!! IT ALMOST HAD ME IN TEARS YOU BITCH.....OHHH I LOVE YOU......DAMN!!!
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think... that you should do chapter 7.. Yup yup...
person outlander_girl
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE DAMNIT!!!!! If you don't give us a response to his confession, I will put an octopus in you pants! ...Please?
person vixenia
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUUUUU HOW! HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE! -cries- i want more. it twas so awesome. please update PLEASE
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like that confession it was cute update soon
person Anaheyla
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please next chappy!
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You must write the next chapter!!!! I loved the comment about the hair that won't go into any other style!! That was hilarious!! They are so Cute! Typical boys have to fight any chance they get!! Write more!!!
person :O
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...The person of your dreams could be the guy right in front of you…"

PRICELESS! AUTHOR, YOU SLY DOG.

Please continue. :) I really enjoyed your background information, and I don't mind the angst at all! It makes Naruto and Sasuke even hotter, actually. Roar. The confession was definitely "manly." Update soon! ^_^