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by KageKitsuneXXX

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* HE CONFESSED! MAN HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE? PLEZ PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me? This was totally a humourous chapter! I loved it! AND I would REALLY love it if you continued and gave us at least one more chapter (I know you have something planned for what happens next!!!). Therefore I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter(s). My best wishes for you and your writing.
person amberblood
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies* such a cliffhanger! ah well, at least he confessed...
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i raelly really really really really really really really like you story please continue.
person Shosuro
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!
I love it!!!!
person VRon8899
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg...I can't belive I've been ignoring this story since its been out XDDDD I think I laughed at some point *every* chapter!! PLEASE DON'T STOP!!!! Sasu-chan needs some lovin!!!! =^.^=
person raz
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL that last chapter was so omg funny. The line about Carmen Sandiego had me doubled over. That was just nutso. Ah, well, you definitely can't end it there. Keep going!
person Shishio_Not_Logged_In
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o, Oh, my, fucking, god.... What the hell?! -Laughs uncontrollably- A Dominatrix!Hinata, oh, my, that's just way too good. -Wipes tears from eyes- I can't wait for the next chapter, I really can't.
person li-chan
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
who would have thought hinata into s&m lol! I totally imagined her in the costume strangly enough O.o; The story is great overall. hoping for the next chapter.

li-chan
person kaesaku
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha!
your story's hilarious!
..loves it!
do continue!
can't wait for an update~ ;p