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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Adi
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O

As I've been reading this I've been talking to Zrina and talking her ear off about this story non-stop and generally trying to quote the entire thing at her, even though she's already read it.

Anywho. I am naming this without a doubt, the funniest multichap I have ever read. I have never laughed so hard at a fanfic, so hard in fact that I've got tears at the corners of my eyes. My cousin keeps giving me weird looks asking me if I'm okay and my mother keeps yelling at me to shut up (shes trying to sleep)

I finally got around to reading Chapter 4 and 5, somehow other stuff got in my way. And my god. No words. Seriously. Almost every freaking line was my favourite, I couldn't pick one if I tried.

Now I have a question for you, the summary says that this is SasuNaru, but I was wondering if you're going in the direction where Naruto tops. I ask this because I want to rec it in a community on LJ that only accepts NaruSasu recs. That and I'm a die-hard NaruSasu fangirl and I'm not above begging and bribing for it to be NaruSasu. (Seriously, whatever you want) drop me a comment on my LJ (silverwyrm) or y!gallery (Adi) and give me some happy NaruSasu news?

*sends subliminal messaging of NaruSasu*

Needless to say you must write a chapter 6 :D:D:D:D:D:D
person accy
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha cant wait for more. That was great, good job ^^
person Lances
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Kami-sama, please continue and soon! I love this! So hot!
person SasUke28
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG U MUST MAKE A CHAPPIE SIX OR I WILL SEND FANGIRLS ON UR ASS!lolz jp plz update!
person Shayss
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed! But then my internet
glitched and it didn't send! >< -kicks internet-
Anyway.. I shall do it again!

I'll be honest, I clicked this fic by accident. ^^;
I wasn't paying attention to what I was doing and was actually
aiming for a different one.
But I'm glad I got this one instead!
It's funny and enjoyable! It flows nicely and I like how you portray the characters!
I look forward to the next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
~Greenie ^_^
person ringpop
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HURRY-UP-AND-UPDATE YOU-FUCKING-DEMON!!!!!!!! I came back home & saw roleplay on the first page...[along with mine] & i was like YAAAAAAAAAAY!!! UPDATE!!! NO! EDIT!!! YOU ARE EVIIILL!!! : ) love the story by the way, when the girl said dattebyo it had me on the floor rollin!!! hahah from author to author......this is some good shit : ]!WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'm hyper YE-EHH! bahh!
person ringpop
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahah one more thing...I clicked this fic a looooon-long-long time ago & i started to read it & i thought it was a vamp fic for some reason & i was like "Pffft! I'm not reading this crapp!" [because i'm not down with vamp fics (LAME!)] so i was scrolling through more stories & i accidentally clicked yours & i started reading it again & i was like "!!HEYY VAMP FIC!!!NO!" but i scrolled down further & skipped some stuff & i started laffing @ the "I hardly noticed" So i kept reading & i ended up reading all the chapters hahahah WHAT A COINCIDENCE!!! but it's really funny......almost as funny as mine........(NOT!) : ] hehehh i love you
person amberblood
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, I am addicted to this story...it's just the right amount of funny, angsty, Sasuke-is-afraid-of-admitting-he-loves-Naruto ness! If this dies on the site incomplete I will die too...T_T


...dramatic enough to get you to update soon? yes? please? *sobs*
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Chapter 6, and 7, and 8, and maybe 9!!! Definitely continue this!! It is so much fun and has such great humor in it. I love the fact that Sasuke has now twice masturbated to Naruto singing "One Week". I am also loving the dreams, and how reality intrudes on them!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Kimra
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don't need our okay to continue. Just continue already. :D