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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! I think I hurt something laughing so damn hard! Hinata was PRICELESS!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! /tries to remember to breathe through snickering.... That was some really damn funny shit!!!! :D MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow.... =^-^= that was brilliant!!! ~laughing so hard i've fallen off the seat~
Oh Hinita-sama!!!! lol
looking forward to more Sasuke-inner-mind-theatre!!!
ja!!!
Oh Hinita-sama!!!! lol
looking forward to more Sasuke-inner-mind-theatre!!!
ja!!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mary Mother of God Ave Maria Pancakes! I can't...I just...It hurts to laugh...
Whew. Now that I've calmed down a little, I have to say, that was so funny, scary, and just...great. I needed to laugh, but you took that a bit far. Not that I'm complaining in the least. One needs to fall off of a chair every now and again. Hinata's 'assertiveness' was so...oddly expected that I was almost relieved when she came out in full dominatrix glory. This is still extremely good. Keep it up, and please, a sixth chapter would be nice.
Whew. Now that I've calmed down a little, I have to say, that was so funny, scary, and just...great. I needed to laugh, but you took that a bit far. Not that I'm complaining in the least. One needs to fall off of a chair every now and again. Hinata's 'assertiveness' was so...oddly expected that I was almost relieved when she came out in full dominatrix glory. This is still extremely good. Keep it up, and please, a sixth chapter would be nice.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg I was just reading your story when you reviewed mine! thats so freaky! lol, uh anyway I've only got past like the first paragraph before I burst out laughing, "I can believe you need help burying a body" seriously cracked up
anyway back to reading. It is a freaking crime this only has 18 reviews
anyway back to reading. It is a freaking crime this only has 18 reviews
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy man! That was AWESOME!!! AMAZING! Wow you made my day because of the Hinata thing hahaha. Great story! PLEZ UPDATE!!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG
OMFG
HOLY FUCKING CRAP
you see this? this is a gobsmacked Adi, O_O
God, woman, that was so fucking funny, it was like watching an avalanche, seriously, I think I died back there
I know this is a pretty crappy review compared to the fit of laught this first chapter has left me in. But, fuck! SERIOUSLY. I have never been so embarassed for Sasuke and yet laughing my head off at the same time. It was just beautiful! XD
I'm alone in the house and it's pretty late and I usually get freaked out, but this first chapter had me in hysterical laughter.
“Here, you want that back right…umm Dattebayo?” She winked at him Just pure genius.
anyway, enough of my babbling, must read more, to infinity and beyond batman!
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OMFG
HOLY FUCKING CRAP
you see this? this is a gobsmacked Adi, O_O
God, woman, that was so fucking funny, it was like watching an avalanche, seriously, I think I died back there
I know this is a pretty crappy review compared to the fit of laught this first chapter has left me in. But, fuck! SERIOUSLY. I have never been so embarassed for Sasuke and yet laughing my head off at the same time. It was just beautiful! XD
I'm alone in the house and it's pretty late and I usually get freaked out, but this first chapter had me in hysterical laughter.
“Here, you want that back right…umm Dattebayo?” She winked at him Just pure genius.
anyway, enough of my babbling, must read more, to infinity and beyond batman!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO . . . yep, it's just like my momma always told me; it's the quiet ones you got to watch out for. Such a funny story. Just loved this last chapter.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing~! It's the funniest Naru/Sasu I've read. I am LOL as a read. I love the 'One Week' thing. You are obligated to finish it until Naruto and Sasuke get together and keep it hysterical too! ;)
Love the dominatrix Hinata~! lol
Thanks!
Love the dominatrix Hinata~! lol
Thanks!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 review
I hope you don't mind me reviewing every chapter, I usually go fangirl crazy when I find a fic that I love to pieces and end up talking the authors ear off about what I like, love, must marry and have fangirls babies with etc XD (tell me to shut up when I talk to much ^^)
So I noticed you've got a pretty sound knowledge of the medic profession, you either watch a shit load of Scrubs/Grey's anatomy or you're a medic/doctor yourself. Either way I appreciate that you know your stuff! :D
As for the actual chapter, you killed me again, you can't keep doing that you know, I've got to go to work tomorrow! LOL I think I'm gonna adore Sasuke in this fic, usually I'm all for Naruto, and Sasuke I'm a bit meh on, but I think the little emo wins on this count. I also feel pretty bad for him, but nothing quite as enjoyable as Sasuke torture :D
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I hope you don't mind me reviewing every chapter, I usually go fangirl crazy when I find a fic that I love to pieces and end up talking the authors ear off about what I like, love, must marry and have fangirls babies with etc XD (tell me to shut up when I talk to much ^^)
So I noticed you've got a pretty sound knowledge of the medic profession, you either watch a shit load of Scrubs/Grey's anatomy or you're a medic/doctor yourself. Either way I appreciate that you know your stuff! :D
As for the actual chapter, you killed me again, you can't keep doing that you know, I've got to go to work tomorrow! LOL I think I'm gonna adore Sasuke in this fic, usually I'm all for Naruto, and Sasuke I'm a bit meh on, but I think the little emo wins on this count. I also feel pretty bad for him, but nothing quite as enjoyable as Sasuke torture :D
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
The massage was pretty fucking hot. Excuse my potty mouth, I tend to swear a lot when I'm excited. No, not excited like that, well actually, excited like that too :D Anywaaaaay, watching train wreck. I CANNOT BELIEVE SASUKE TOOK THE HAND AND PLACED IT ON THE ERECTION. I just stared at the line for like 30 seconds before I slapped my hand to my forehead and bemoaned Sasuke's social interaction skills, so funny.
Doesn't matter though because smex quickly followed. :D:D:D:D Ok I haven't got to the end of the chapter (I sometimes review as I read) but if this is all a dream for Sasuke, I will cry.
Oh...
My..
God..
You did that on purpose. Grr. lol I'm just gonna pretend that didn't happen
AH I LOVE THAT SONG. I do that too -_-
PHONE SEX. I'm just gonna carry on reading, and stop screaming the surprises you're springing on me at you, sorry! XD
As Naruto geared for his big finish, so did Sasuke. LOL!!!!!!!!
Ok what other pairing do I find as cute as KibaHina? Why LeeSaku of course!
I actually have to stop at this chapter because it's quite late now, and I'm gonna be half asleep at work tomorrow, but reading these 3 chapters was soooooooooooo worth it, and I'll have something to look forward to tomorrow evening. :D lol oh and this fic excited me so much I went and demanded Rasengan22 read it too, so she'll probably take over the fangirling for me XD
'night!
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The massage was pretty fucking hot. Excuse my potty mouth, I tend to swear a lot when I'm excited. No, not excited like that, well actually, excited like that too :D Anywaaaaay, watching train wreck. I CANNOT BELIEVE SASUKE TOOK THE HAND AND PLACED IT ON THE ERECTION. I just stared at the line for like 30 seconds before I slapped my hand to my forehead and bemoaned Sasuke's social interaction skills, so funny.
Doesn't matter though because smex quickly followed. :D:D:D:D Ok I haven't got to the end of the chapter (I sometimes review as I read) but if this is all a dream for Sasuke, I will cry.
Oh...
My..
God..
You did that on purpose. Grr. lol I'm just gonna pretend that didn't happen
AH I LOVE THAT SONG. I do that too -_-
PHONE SEX. I'm just gonna carry on reading, and stop screaming the surprises you're springing on me at you, sorry! XD
As Naruto geared for his big finish, so did Sasuke. LOL!!!!!!!!
Ok what other pairing do I find as cute as KibaHina? Why LeeSaku of course!
I actually have to stop at this chapter because it's quite late now, and I'm gonna be half asleep at work tomorrow, but reading these 3 chapters was soooooooooooo worth it, and I'll have something to look forward to tomorrow evening. :D lol oh and this fic excited me so much I went and demanded Rasengan22 read it too, so she'll probably take over the fangirling for me XD
'night!
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