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Chapter 6! Please. You can't just stop there!

Heh, it's been one week. Lol.

Yes please LOL, updates are a integral part of life XD. This is really good and funny, I also feel really bad for poor Sasuke though. Why won't the idiot just open his mouth and say something!!??? If he keeps this shit up he's gonna be so fucking embarrassed, when he finally does blurt it out at the most inopportune moment! LOL on second thought that'll probably be funny as hell, Thank God (or Masashi Kishimoto) for fictional characters that are just way too much fun to torture in pleasurable ways XD.

Oh, I would say a chapter 5 is necessary. Sex or no sex, you should probably resolve things between them. Because Sasuke's fantasies are not healthy, as you've already proven. That, and they're bound to get him in trouble. Not that he wouldn't mind certain types of trouble. So yes, definitely another chapter. Closure is good!

Yay! I've just read all chapters at once and my mind is squirming like "more! Give me real lemons!" XD
You know, I love your sense of humour- it is rare to find such a good story AND humour as well :) So please, continue. You write addictive stuff.

Oh please make chapter 5, its a darling story and I've been hooked since chapter one when Naruto thought Sasuke had killed someone....My heart goes out to Sasuke, poor lil lamb can't get his fox! Though the hell he has to go though is too funny...omg! and I love when Sasuke starts to sing 'One Week' naruto is a slave to the music...hehe but anway heck yeah bring on the SasuNaru man lovin! Sasuke's got needs!!!

I'm enjoying this story, though I was so pissed off at Choji for kicking Sasuke out. I'm all ready to kill him now... which is funny because Choji is so not the usual character to have me wanting ot hate them. Grr... Anywa, enjoying this story immensly and would love to read more. :D

good fic so far!...^^...

hmmm.. as for ideas... well.. Sasuke could always contact Kiba somehow and the two could ruin the fate??.. or perhaps Neji forbids it from happening after it's "somehow" slipped to him??.. XD.. then Sasuke could always take a distraught Naruto out on the date instead.. add alcohol... or perhaps Naruto finding Sasuke's stash of props to help girls look like the blond??.. that could be interesting... nothing like stumbling across pics of yourself, blond wigs, blue contacts, etc.. XD

I do so love this story. Not often you see a love-sick Sasuke. I nearly wet myself at a few parts. If the rest is like the first three chapters, it should prove to be extremely good. And, as a side note...if I had a doctor that looked like Naruto...I think I'd just pass out. Hehe. But in any case, it's good. Keep it up!

a/j

Wow, that is awesome. I totally knew it was a dream, but it was still fun, and then he goes and manipulates Naruto into helping him get off. Sneaky bastard, but oh so entertaining.
This is great work and thoroughly addictive; Sasuke's misadventures are hilarious with how close he comes to losing it at the slightest provocation from Naruto coupled with his pathetic attempts to cover it up.
The first chapter was my favourite - Sasuke's brain freezes are classic. And the fact that he gets away with it! A dense Naruto (even as a doctor) is a good Naruto.
To be honest, I'd been losing interest in Naruto fanfics - they had become so repetitive - but this fic has helped me rekindle my passion for it. Thanks and please keep writing.

Aww I liked that lol, just read the last three chp's and it's interesting ^_^ Sasuke's a perv lol but hey I think he's just been hiding that deep down loool :D and Naruto is just completely oblivious, I mean after the incident with the girl it's pretty hard not to get what Sasuke was doing - but hey lol it's Naruto. I hope you write another chapter because hell I'd sure as hell be disappointed if it stopped there. The lemon dream was great too :D... and if you want to add more of that I ain't gonna say no loool ^_6

Hina xxxx