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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two.
Poor Sasuke. His one true love is chasing after someone else. D:
Poor Sasuke. His one true love is chasing after someone else. D:
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three.
I loved that, amazing writing skills. FTW!!
I loved that, amazing writing skills. FTW!!
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THE BEST NARUSASU STORY EVER!! JUST BRILLIANT, FULL OF GREAT SENSE OF HUMOR, SWELLING WITH EMOTIONS, AND PLAINLY JUST ADORABLE, LOVE IT WITH ALL MY HEART... DID I MENTION IT'S HOTTES AND SIMPLY BEST IN SMUT APARTMENT AS WELL? OFFICIALLY YOU'RE BEST AT THIS... LOT'S OF LOVE AND HUGS... THANK U FOR MAKING MY DAY HAPPIER ^__~
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAKE ROLE PLAY A SERIES OR I'LL FIND WHERE YOU LIVE AND COME EAT YOUR FACE OFF.....NOM NOM NOM >:F
Please. ^-^
Please. ^-^
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh I read it to the end. And I had such a good time! I kind of like your writing-style and most things in your story was really great.
You sure embarass Sasuke a lot. Hehe poor guy. I don't think you left him alone one single chapter.
The getting rid of Hinata-thing was a little WTF??? *laugh* I was so not ready for that one! (I saw eurotrip recently *nods*)
I loved, really loved, the two times Sasuke made Naruto sing One Week for him to jerk off to. Mwahaha! That was just so great!
You have no idea how happy I was when Sasuke finally confessed. Finally! Okay, then other problems kept coming up but at least we was over and finished with that part. Ehm, okay he kind of did a second confession in front of everybody in the hospital later, but anyway. Moving on.
Had a lot of fun at the 'extra' chapter (60 or 100 hehe). I think it's very interesting the way you made them 'top'. I mean; you seem to put Sasuke as a permanent uke (not so surprising since he gets transformed into a mindless sexdoll *scratch back of neck*) but then you actually let him top when they were doing 69.
I always love when Gaara is all like "don't worry, Naruto. I kill them for you". Gaara is such a good good friend! *happy* And he has a list! That's so hilarious!
“I hurt… here, here and here!” Sasuke turned innocent eyes on Naruto, as he pointed to his head, chest and groin.
I had a really hard time to stop laughing after reading this.
I'm really glad that they worked everything out in the end. (Okay if the hadn't kind of the whole, point with the story would be lost but anyway!) I kind of liked how you wrote some parts of the sex-scene, the awkwardness and the fights. But I kind of agree with Sasuke on the condom. I mean WTF? Sasuke had already had Naruto unprotected in his mouth so it was clearly kind of late so start think about protection then. *shakes head*
Anyway. I liked your story and had lots of fun. Thanks for the entertainment.
You sure embarass Sasuke a lot. Hehe poor guy. I don't think you left him alone one single chapter.
The getting rid of Hinata-thing was a little WTF??? *laugh* I was so not ready for that one! (I saw eurotrip recently *nods*)
I loved, really loved, the two times Sasuke made Naruto sing One Week for him to jerk off to. Mwahaha! That was just so great!
You have no idea how happy I was when Sasuke finally confessed. Finally! Okay, then other problems kept coming up but at least we was over and finished with that part. Ehm, okay he kind of did a second confession in front of everybody in the hospital later, but anyway. Moving on.
Had a lot of fun at the 'extra' chapter (60 or 100 hehe). I think it's very interesting the way you made them 'top'. I mean; you seem to put Sasuke as a permanent uke (not so surprising since he gets transformed into a mindless sexdoll *scratch back of neck*) but then you actually let him top when they were doing 69.
I always love when Gaara is all like "don't worry, Naruto. I kill them for you". Gaara is such a good good friend! *happy* And he has a list! That's so hilarious!
“I hurt… here, here and here!” Sasuke turned innocent eyes on Naruto, as he pointed to his head, chest and groin.
I had a really hard time to stop laughing after reading this.
I'm really glad that they worked everything out in the end. (Okay if the hadn't kind of the whole, point with the story would be lost but anyway!) I kind of liked how you wrote some parts of the sex-scene, the awkwardness and the fights. But I kind of agree with Sasuke on the condom. I mean WTF? Sasuke had already had Naruto unprotected in his mouth so it was clearly kind of late so start think about protection then. *shakes head*
Anyway. I liked your story and had lots of fun. Thanks for the entertainment.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on the second chapter of your story, but I LOVE it. I burst out laughing like 20 times over the "barenaked ladies" song. Absolutely HILARIOUS. I'll probably end up leaving you more love in the form of comments... hope you don't mind~~
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you just dont know what a genius u r. OMG OMG OMG i can keep saying that for ever. i cannot describe in words how *fill in the blank* ur story was! naruto-obsessed Sasuke is such a turn on >_< and Naruto...dont even get me started. the flow of the story was perfect. the mood so light and absolutely histerical!!! u deserve a nobel price for this fic *gladly hands u one* please do continue...and quench the narusasu cravings of your fellow fan girls. YOU CONVERTED ME!! IM GLAD TO SAY THAT U CONVERTED ME TO A NARUSASU OBSESSED-PERVY-FANGIRL. I WOULDNT WANT IT ANY OTHER WAY XD
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I left my review in y-gal actually. Is there any chance that you'll be putting your multichaps in y-gal too? If not, then here's my email addy for any notifications. hanabi_sakura@hotmail.com
Cheers!
Cheers!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES
absolutely
YES
please write more, babe!
This was the most hilarious thing I've ever read for a VERY long time,
and I can't wait to read your other stuff as well~!
'till then, lovey
stay well~! ^o^
absolutely
YES
please write more, babe!
This was the most hilarious thing I've ever read for a VERY long time,
and I can't wait to read your other stuff as well~!
'till then, lovey
stay well~! ^o^
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Yes! Yes! YES!!!! I may be a little late, but I would absolutely love it if you made "Role-Play" into a series and I hope that my enthusiasm is enough encouragment alone to entice you into doing so. I positively love your brand of humor and frankly can't get enough of it. Whenever I am feeling a little blue I read your fanfictions which make me laugh everytime.....not to mention you write some of the hottest sex scenes ever. Anyway though, I couldn't resist a little imput and I hope I'm not too late.
dryad1789@hotmail.com
dryad1789@hotmail.com