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by KageKitsuneXXX

person charmpit
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That laundry room lemon smoked. Nice work.
person Adi
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is acting as my stand in review :P
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Raw evil was stamped on his face..."

I fucking worship you.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sakura had the same tone of voice when she said that same sentence…only it ended with the word ‘shopping’.

Seriously, I can't resist repasting your own words cause they're that genius.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“So let me guess. In your wet-dreams, fantasy-Naruto simply slides his magical dick, easily and painlessly up your mythical self-lubricating ass?”
BEST LINE EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it took me about 10 minutes, no more, to recover and stop laughing like an ass...until I read this
"Well…sure it sounds stupid when it’s phrased like that."
It has never taken me so long to read a chapter. I'm still clutching my mouth from giggle fits.
so many beautiful moments...sigh.

I can't believe this has been up a week and I didn't realize it!
You can take as long as you want to write...you never disapoint, so thank you:)

as for voting, a resounding "YES!" ( I am puonding my fist on my desk)
just like the Paris blurb. wonderful, self contained, showed some of the evolution of there relationship, fun.
oneshots, even two or three chapter stories would be great.
your a wonderful treat, write as long as you enjoy and have the time to do it.
Thank you again:)
person Luna_Meow
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Last chapter! Err... it's the end, already? 8D

Anyways, great finale KageKitsune. (And I was screaming out, "Kitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~~~~~!!" here! XD) Loved it very much.

Thanks for writing, and hope to read more of your fics soon! :D
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome ending to an awesome story!! I'm glad you finally came back and finished it! and no some of us didn't forget about it!! ^_^ It would be great if you made it into a series. I would love to read more of it.
person Jien
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good thing I'm a nursing student to get some of the medical terms. Even if they don't mean much to most viewers. I'm neko42 in ff.n I'll add you when I get there. =^.^=
person vikuta
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my god! i was laughing so hard through all this story. man you're amazing! you knpw i don't even know, how to describe how i luv you because of this story.
really. have no words. just have a prize or something. the bitchy sasuke before and during is simply the funniest thing i ever saw! and after...wow. just wow. very good... very.
love ya. thank you for exsisting!
person vikuta
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
before during and after sex. i'm so thrilled that i even can't write normal.